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Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by Reborn!, Oct 15, 2006.

  1. Reborn! Banned

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    ... for a possible manga. Both came out better than expected, although they stay need to be cleaned up. Be as critical as you want, as it would be most helpful. Hope you guys like them:amuse

    A sit down with David Rakoff

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  2. Mew♥ Reading fanfics :D

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    wow, nice drawings! keep up the wonderful work!:nod
     
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    Those are actually pretty good. :amuse
     
  5. Haruka modkop

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    I can see alot of potential in these characters.

    Pros:
    • Your shading is unique, almost like Kubo Taito's.
    • The characters look promising, keep them as you draw, and see how you can modify them while your style grows.

    Cons:
    • You should change the face structure, to show that they are completely different characters. If you don't, they seem like they have the same personality as each other.
    • Your shading is unique, but in some areas the shading is random and out of place. Try using an imaginary sun in the corner. Imagine what shadows and lighting would reflect on your character.
    • When doing a 3/4th view of a person, the eye furthest away should be slanted either downwards or upwards depending if the character is looking up or down. Also, sometimes it may be smaller than the other eye depending on the view.
    • I suggest a new style to do the eyes. They seem very dim and uncolorful. Try experimenting new ways so the eyes can bring more life into the work of art.

    Overall, keep it up, and good luck with your doujin!
     
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    Thnx for the comment and feedback Haruka, ill definaltley takes these things into consideration next time i draw:)
     
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