Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by Naruto_o1, Oct 20, 2006.
hi people... i learnt a new style of brushing! RnC people!
Very busy background, and the stocks are too small, and need to be bigger.
Text can use some work also.
holy crap, way too much going on, they dont read at all. also what the hell does RnC mean. its CnC
rate and comment
You have too much crap in too small of a space, there is no focus. Also the text is too much it dominates the stock and thats not good... also.. everything does not look better with scan lines.
nice effects but its way too overused! *watta redundancy XD*
yup that's what i think.. and stock dont
naruto 01, i have an idea, lose the strokes on the splatters and then repost the sigs, i think they'll look a little better
The effects completely overwhelm the already small stock. Your best bet would be to cut down on some the effects and try to find bigger stock.
:S itz too groovy 5/10
The style you used and the backround effects look alright, just needs a few changes.
1. Stocks are too small, enlarge them.
2. The backrounds overlap the stocks, which make them look crappy.
3. It's way overdone. Remember, you don't have to make it simple, just don't overdo it.
Keep trying. Your banners aren't bad. =]