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[309]:Sasuke and the Snake

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by SxR, Jun 5, 2007.

  1. SxR

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    Hi! my first naruto coloring!!
    i'm new to this so it doesnt contain any fancy shading or coloring ..... :oh hope u guys like it anyway.... :p



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    Thank you!!!
     
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  2. Yakushi Kabuto

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    The colors look good to me. The only thing that really bugs me is the shine on Sasuke's hair, it going in a straight line doesn't really follow the way heads are curved. I see you started to shade his skin a little, perhaps some further shading for the folds of his outfit would make it look less flat, yes?
     
  3. Aman

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    ^What he said.

    I still like it though, good job. :)
     
  4. SxR

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    i'll make sure the changes are done accordingly!!!


    thank you sirs!! smile-big
     
  5. Creator

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    Looks good. Add a bit more detail.
     
  6. SxR

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    ok will try to make the hair shading a bit better ... smile-big
     
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    Pretty good. I would follow the advice given. But overall you did a pretty good job. :)
     
  8. DethStryque

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    What he said.......
     
  9. spaZ

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    thats not bad for a first coloring, gl improving :D
     
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    thank you!! smile-big
     
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    nice...you should consider adding some shadow on Sasuke's hair.
     
  13. Shirozaki

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    Green doesn't suit it much, and it needs shading. :amuse
     
  14. Haruno Sakura

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    The lineart looks strange... The coloring's good though.
     
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    But i didnt draw it!! :huh
     
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    I like it. Just needs to add some shadow to his hair.
     
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    i know i just cant seem to find the right shade =/
     
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