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328 by HisshouBuraiKen

Discussion in 'Naruto Translations' started by HisshouBuraiKen, Oct 20, 2006.

  1. HisshouBuraiKen

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    Page 1:
    Title: Team 10
    Kakuzu: C'mon, Hidan.
    Hidan: Fuckin' leader...next time I'm cursing HIM.

    Text: The pair reluctantly leaves!
    Izumo: They're just gonna leave? What's going on?

    Asuma: KHACK
    Ino: Sensei!
    Chouji: Asuma-sensei!

    Shikamaru: Ino! Chouji! Get him out of here!
    Hidan: Are you deaf?
    We're gonna come right back, and you'd better be here when we do!

    Besides, he's already dead.

    Page 2:
    Hidan: Later, bitches.

    Shikamaru: Chouji, Ino! Now!
    Ino: I'll try and heal him!
    Chouji: Okay!

    Asuma: Don't...worry about it...

    Page 3:
    Asuma: I...can tell...
    This is...it...for me...

    You...should see that...too...

    Shikamaru: God damnit, shut up and save your strength!
    Chouji: Ino..
    Ino: He's been hit in four vital spots...

    Page 4:
    Ino: There's nothing I can do...
    Asuma: I think I finally get...
    why the Third did...what he did...
    But as always...I took too long...

    Page 5:
    Asuma: Ino...Chouji...Shikamaru...
    Theres...KHACK...one last thing I wanna tell you...

    Chouji: Sensei, please don't talk any more!
    Shikamaru: CHOUJI!
    Ino...

    Page 6:
    Shimamaru: These are Asuma-sensei's last words...
    let's just listen.

    Asuma: Ino...
    Ino: Yes...

    Asuma: You're stubborn and pushy...but also dependable and responsible...
    Shikamaru and Chouji...are total goof-offs...so please...keep them in line...
    Ino: I will...

    Asuma: And don't...let Sakura do better than you...
    In medical jutsu...or love...
    Ino: I won't...I promise!

    Page 7:
    Asuma: Chouji...
    You're so kind-hearted...and you always think about your friends...
    That's why you'll be come...stronger than everyone else...
    so have...more confidence...in yourself...

    Chouji: You got it.
    Asuma: Oh yeah...
    you should...probably...diet a little...

    Chouji: I'll give it a shot...but no promises...

    Asuma: Heh...
    And Shimamaru...

    Page 8:
    Asuma: You're so smart...and have great sense...as a ninja...
    you could definitely...become Hokage...

    Although...KHACK...you're too lazy...
    you'd probably hate it...

    Shougi...
    I never...beat you...

    Oh yeah...what I said...about the king...

    So do you know who the king is?

    I'll tell you...who it is...
    come closer...

    Page 9:
    Shikamaru: Asuma...you-
    Asuma: Please...Shikamaru...

    Can I...but I quit...
    ah wel...

    My cigarettes...are in my pouch...
    I'd like...one last smoke...

    Page 10:
    Asuma: Whooo....
    Everyone: KHECK! ACCK! KUUGH!

    Asuma: Oh, sorry 'bout that! I'm Sarutobi Asuma, and from today on I'll be leading team 10.
    It's not gonna be easy, so you'd better be ready!

    Hey, don't CRY.
    I haven't even done anything yet!

    Shikamaru: Your stupid smoke's making our eyes water!

    Page 11:
    Asuma: Chouji-kun...have you ever heard the word "restraint"?
    Shikamaru: The bill's already 300 ryou.
    Asuma: WHAT! You freakin' fa-UGH!

    Chouji: Whew, I'm stuffed!
    Ino: Who're THOSE for?
    Asuma: Eh? Uh, no one, really...

    Sign: Yamanaka Flowers
    Ino: Say hi to KURENAI-SENSEI for me!
    Asuma: Wh-WHA-

    Page 12:
    Asuma: You can figure most of it out by reading the rulebook.
    The rest, you learn as you go.

    Shikamaru: How troublesome...
    Whatever, I get it. Let's play.

    Asuma: Y-...you won...
    Shikamaru: You didn't have to take it easy on me.

    Asuma: Shikamaru was the only participant this year who got promoted to Chuunin.
    So as his commanding jounin, I get to brag to everyone now.
    Chouji, Ino...keep working hard and you'll get it next time!

    Page 13:
    Asuma: Great job, Ino and Chouji.
    Now everyone in team 10 is a chuunin!
    And now, our team is officially disbanded.

    You three will go on to become captains and eventually lead your own teams...
    These earrings are a present for you three. Congrats!

    Don't ever forget that the four of us were "Team 10"! [:crying]

    Page 14:
    Chouji: SENSEI!

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    Chouji: ::sobbing::

    SFX: Raindrops

    Kotetsu: A fitting end for a true shinobi...

    Page 16:
    SFX: Flick
    Shikamaru: COUGH COUGH
    Uh...::sniff::

    Stupid cigarettes...

    Page 17:
    Shikamaru: The smoke always makes my eyes water...

    Side: As the gentle rain and smoke will mask our tears of grief, we say...Goodbye.
     
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  2. HisshouBuraiKen

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    No stickification, eh...I neva get no respect!

    (bump)
     
  3. CHEH

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    poor Hisshou :( you deserve the stickiness, i love your translations. D8
     
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    Awww make him sticky ><
     
  5. Muk

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    sticky his thread!!!

    awesome translation
     
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