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A Love Story: Kin, and Zaku.

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Vance, Sep 28, 2006.

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    Its rainy out. The water drips down like a faucet, Orochimaru's minions, the Sound Ninja Trio, Dosu, Kin, and Zaku, form a triangle in a dark. They bow. Orochimaru appears, he has a sinister grin. "Good, your here, I want to thank you for your mission. You sucssefully killed Kabuto, the traitor. You may have the rest of the day off." The minions watched as Orochimaru speak positively about them. They leave the site, confused, but happy. Zaku watches Dosu leave. "Ya' know, with Dosu gone...." Zaku seductavilely whispers. Kin pushes his shoulder off. "Ewww, Zaku, were, not supposed to date." She hisses. Zaku smiles. "Who's stopping us?" Kin blushes, then, they share a kisss:nuts :nuts :nuts
     
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  2. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    please right some more I like it
     
  3. Vance Banned

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    NOT THIS FIC! I WAS A N00B WHEN I WROTE THIS!!!
     
  4. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    but it's good like kin zaku and dosu
     
  5. Vance Banned

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    Yeah, but this fic is H*O*R*R*I*B*L*E*

    I wanna cry. :cry
     
  6. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    no it's not it's just short if you work on it It WILL get better in no time
     
  7. Vance Banned

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    I can't work on it. *Stabs it with a knife in the heart* I'm sorry naruto fan 101.
     
  8. Shika-maru "Your such a drag..."

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    *mouth open* Wow that made my mouth drop!But it could happen i guess.
     
  9. Vance Banned

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    I was a n00b when i wrote this, don't kill me.

    @naruto fan gurl101: How did you find this waaaaay back in the ff line? :huh
     
  10. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    I don't know I was just looking and my sister Kisara momochi sent it to me and right all ready
     
  11. txsfld I'm lame.

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    it is not to terrible i dont see what your so worried about vance
     
  12. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    Naruto_fan_gurl101 i sent this to you 2 months ago........ boy do you ever check your mail
     
  13. Dogma word....?

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    Wow Vance, Just how many fics have you started? I'm wondering if I look through the pages if I would find more things you made and discontinued.

    This one really wasn't terrible either.
     
  14. Vance Banned

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    This was the worst fic I ever wrote, ever.
     
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    ya really. lol
     
  17. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    not uh Right or usle I will poke you In the eye with a Flaming wrench frie and beat you with a hocky.......And you where not A bOOb just right the dumm thing
     
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    w............t.................f..............
     
  19. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    poke you in the eye with a flaming frech frie and beat you you with a hockey stick
     
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  21. Dogma word....?

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    I'm sorry, I just couldn't help it. :amuse

    Language, though it's suiting.
     
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    Thats rich... Seriously rich. :rofl
     
  23. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    only to Vance if he doesn't right anything soon and calls himself a nOOb agian
     
  24. Vance Banned

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    ????? what???
     
  25. Dogma word....?

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    I think I get it...

    They want you to write it, and are going against when you called yourself a n00b for starting it.

    Understand now?
     
  26. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    I was Quoting .uchiha.itachi. on somthing he said and yes I will get you in your sleep Vance If you don't right soon
     
  27. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    And thank you hakanami thats my piont and I will kill him if he don't right some more of the dum thing
     
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    yes,you where when you said really to my treat to Vance and I said no only Vance
     
  30. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    OMG SIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU STOLE THAT FROM ME............ HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!!


    In case everone is lost. She is my little sis. But i fore warn you. She is crazy, so I hardly doubt so want cause serious harm. Sorry Vance. Maybe youcould write alittle more. I mean, i could holdher off for awhile, but hey, i get get doubled teamed and tortured by her and her twin sis........... as for the story part, it's actually very good. heck every thing youmake is actually very good.

    OH! i almost forgot, sis........ YOUR SPELLING STILL SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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