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Chapter 283 by bebong

Discussion in 'Naruto Translations' started by bebong, Nov 14, 2005.

  1. bebong Narutimate Bebong

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    Sorry for the very late submission. Here's the

    link:Here is Knives' HQ scanlation of #283!

    My first shot. Pls download it and give me feedback:smile-big Its quite good thou ( In my Opinion):p
     
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  2. nytrogyn ..where's my weed!?

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    Meh, i'd say its okay.. good job bebong! :) :tem :smile-big :laugh
     
  3. imax happy naruto creepy anime

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    not so bad for a first shot, but some things to change ^^

    did you done some clean work on ? you could've clean the double page 08-09 to make one (you should've ask me the page, i clean it to draw (i know, you didn't know it :p), but soon a raw is out with a good double page)).

    Else, some typesetting like page 17.. NARUT on a line and O alone on an other.. you could resize a bit the text to put NARUTO on a single line.

    you could redraw border of frame.

    except those it's not so bad : )
     
  4. bebong Narutimate Bebong

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    oh, okay, thanks for the tips. I'll try to redo it
     
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