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Chapter 328 Translation by [Stevo]

Discussion in 'Naruto Translations' started by sesshoumarus, Oct 18, 2006.

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    Chapter 328 Translation by [Stevo]-COMPLETED

    Chapter 328 Translation by [Stevo]
    (First ever translation)

    Chapter 328
    Translation by Stevo
    Title: "Team 10".

    Kakuzu: Let's go Hidan!
    Hidan: Damn Leader... I should curse HIM next time!
    Asuma: [Coughs]
    InoShikaChou: Asuma-Sensei!
    Shikamaru: Chouji. Ino. Get Asuma-Sensei out of here!
    Hidan: I already told them... they better remain where they are so we can return! That type of guy is probably going to die anyway! We're such idiots!

    [Hidan & Kakuzu disappear]


    Shikamaru: Chouji. Ino. Hurry!
    Asuma: It's alright. This... is gonna be it for me, guys. Even I realize it. I'm sure you all... know it as well.
    Ino(Thinks): They've gone after damaging 4 vital points, and they don't rush for any cause?
    Asuma: What is it Sandaime wanted? I believe I can finally understand now. I'm always too late. Long ago, he always helped them choose. [Cough] Ino, Shikamaru, Chouji... I mean, he gave something to everyone, and I want to say... to everyone...
    Chouji: Asuma-Sensei! Don't Speak!
    Shikamaru: Chouji!!!!
    [Chouji is shocked for a moment]
    Shikamaru: Ino. You also... just listen to him! These are Asuma-Sensei's final words, so listen up!
    Asuma: Ino, you are very energetic, but you also prove to be very responsible. Chouji and Shikamaru are a bit inept, so you have to watch over them.
    Ino: Yes... Sensei
    Asuma: ...and do not lose against Sakura in either Ninjutsu or love.
    Ino: Yes!
    Asuma: Chouji... You are very kind. You're someone who always thinks about the feelings of another and his friends, therefore, you will become a ninja that can allow them to trust in you and have the same given in return, and that is why you'll become a stronger ninja than anyone.
    Chouji: Yeah...
    Asuma: Also... you kinda need to go on a diet.
    Chouji: That's not very possible... but I'll try for you.
    Asuma: ...and you, Shikamaru... Your mind is sharp and your sense for being a ninja... is very good. You have a lot of talent. You could even become the Hokage one day, although... With you as a leader... you'd probably just whimper and moan.
    Asuma: I have never managed to beat you once, and so I have earned my place in Shougi... and as for the 'King', I believe I've left it all for you. Come closer... and I'll let you in... on who it is.

    [Asuma whispers to Shikamaru]
    Shikamaru: Asuma! You said you...
    Asuma: I'll leave these to you...Shikamaru. Those cigarrettes I needed to try to stop smoking are in my pocket. I want one final drag...

    Asuma: Phwoooo(Exhaling Smoke I'm assuming?)
    [Memory Flashback]
    InoShikaChou: [Cough, Cough, Cough]
    Asuma: Ah! Sorry, Sorry! I am Sarutobi Asuma and I command Team 10 from today! I will do things tough, so be prepared. No crying! You don't need to do that! All I'm saying is we'll be going to do great things together!
    Shikamaru: Your cigarette makes my eyes water...

    [BBQ Place]
    Asuma: Chouji, do you know the meaning to the word 'restriction'?
    Shikamaru: Man, we had 300 ryous worth of food!

    [Florist Shop]
    Ino: Who are the flowers for?
    Asuma: These one's just particularly radiate to me.
    Ino: Well, you can give my greetings to Kurenai for me.
    Asuma: Because...?

    [On A Porch]
    Asuma: You can read the rules in the book later, for now just learn them while playing.
    Shikamaru: That's kinda foolish, but I believe I took in enough to function properly.
    Asuma: I've... lost!?
    Shikamaru: You don't have to go easy on me!

    Asuma: You are the unique one that had passed the Chuunin exams. [Looks to Shika]. As your Jounin, I am very proud. all that remains is that Ino and Chouji become Chuunin aswell. You two hang in there! [Noting to Ino & Chouji]

    Asuma: They've done it so well. Chouji and Ino, the entire Team 10 are Chuunin, and this... is why my work here is finished. They'll all continue ahead. Each one of you will become leaders of a new team. The graduates of those who want to now become Chuunin themselves, and through that... they will always be... Team 10! [Asuma dies]

    Chouji: SENSEI!!!

    [Rain begins pouring down]

    [Shikamaru lights himself a cigarette and begins to inhale the smoke]
    Shikamaru: [He coughs as he starts crying hysterically]. Really... I hate to smoke. This thing is making my damn eyes water.

    [Kurenai stares out of her window as she watches the rain, as if it impacts somehow on her heart]

    End
     
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    can someone post the images?
     
  5. geG Very Rude

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    You're not supposed to post spoilers like that outside of the Telegrams until after the raw comes out.
     
  6. Mider T Busting in and out of guts

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    Nice finale, wait to go Asuma
     
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    I guess that's it for Asuma...

    :cry

    Well, now on to some other stories about Part II !
     
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    Good going, Sessh.
     
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    Finally! We get to move along in the Manga. :amuse
     
  10. Kenny Florian Active Member

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    Good way to go out Asuma.
     
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    Poor Asuma. How many Sarutobi's does Kishimoto plan on killing? What a sad, sad day. I already heard bad news from my family, now it's the death of Asuma. Oh well, at least the manga can proceed to other matters.
     
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    OMG SHIKA SMOKE!!!!
     
  13. rasengan231mb hmm....

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    ya, the one good thing is that we can finally see other things, like what naruto's new technique will be

    (did we all forget about that, i almost did)
     
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    damn he dies...and shika will have cancer soon.
     
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    Poor Asuma..... :cry


    I wonder if Shikamaru is gonna take up smoking now?
     
  16. Akatsuki Leader Uzimaki Akatsuki leader

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    wow that sad why to the sarutobi family well he died great reps for this
     
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    F is for Failure. This should not be in here, it should be in the "telegram" section newbie
     
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    New chapter is out already? :huh
     
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    Well, I guess fans can't bitch anymore about Kishi not killing off characters. This is indeed a sad death indeed. It almost made me cry and I'm not even an Asuma fan.
     
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    R.I.P Asuma Sarutobi
     
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    ASUMA?!?
    ASUMA!
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :arg
    *cries*
    I hate Hidan now. :cry

    *enters through portal & cries on Asuma's body*

    Team 10: o__O?!?!?!?!??!?
     
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    Wonder who's gonna' kick hidan's ass now... hmmmm? man.. revenge is gonna' be a bitch.
     
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    naruto using asumas weapon?

    hidans final words: *realizes asumas weapon* geez.....now aint that a B *dies*
     
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    Naruto would be badass with those trench knives.
     
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    Asuma died, huh?

    Well that sucks.

    :[ That just ruined my night.
     
  26. sesshoumarus New Member

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    "Naruto Translations Freelance translation and scanlation groups or individuals can exhibit their releases here."

    If it doesn't belong here, then maybe they should change the title, because that seems more than right to me. :)

    ...and I is for Idiot.

    ...AND, your age said you're listed as 18, right? You realize you actually used the term 'newbie' right? Don't talk. You should be grateful, and if not just stay quiet. :pwned
     
  27. kuchiyoseNOjutsu Badass

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    Wow tnx sessh just awesome. I was waiting for this and I got the story early, way cool, all I need now is the scanlated version. You got this thing pretty early man good job.

    Oh by the way you did post in the right place. Telegrams is for new chapter discussion, translations is exactly that for translations.
     
  28. Dr.Douchebag Terry Wrist

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    thnks for the trans!!!

    asuma :(

    how about the RAW though?
     
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    wow.. that's sad.. I liked asuma :| he was cool.. I hope Kurenai got pregnant from Asuma.. end of the sarutobi family ftl.
     
  30. kataimiko 忘れるものか この一分一秒を

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    for crying out loud, how about posting the actual pages?


    no, Konohamaru is still alive as well as any possible siblings he may have, along with his parents.
     
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