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Chapter 356 page 9 Sasuke Panel

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by ViЯaL, Jun 6, 2007.

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  1. ViЯaL

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    I havent been coloring lately so i did this :nod

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    Hm, well, some white is showing, but that could easily be fixed if you are using photoshop and use the magic wand to select what you want and expand it by one pixel. Don't konw how to fix it in other programs other than going under the lines layer with the same color. The lime-green on the grass is a little distracting, seems too bright. While the base shade of his skin looks fine his face does look the slightest bit flat, I think some shading outside of where the lines are would be nice, like you know, a bit of light for the tip of his nose, maybe a little dark for the sides, and so on.
     
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    ignoring the edges/spots...

    it's good overall. i like the inside of the hood being red, a nice touch.
    the hair shading looks a bit off though.
     
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    Good. The background could be a bit better.
     
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    it is nice but the colors are a bit too strong...Sasuke's shirt is white/light blue, unless you wanted to make it red, still another tone of red would look better imo.

    The mountains and grass could also be better, and try using more than one color on them (different shades of the same color)

    :)
     
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    if your using photoshop, set the lineart layer to multiply, then set your coloring layer underneath it,this way you color UNDER the lines, eradication nasty white bits
     
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    Yeah, the lines are the only thing i would find a bit of a problem with. However everything else i like just fine. Nice.
     
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    the lines are not perfect and the red is really strong, but everything else seems pretty good
     
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