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Colors of Life And Death (Starts after manga chap 232)

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Yeko, May 22, 2005.

  1. Yeko

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    Here's my fanfic titled "Colors of Life And Death". It's 37 chapters, which average around 2500 words each.

    Here's the plot summary: Naruto and Sasuke are honorary brothers, but Naruto is taken by Orochimaru. Through Oro's gruesome torture, Naruto's chakra will begin to change into something only ever heard of...in legends. NaruHina, SakuLee
     
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    So when is 29 coming out? Great story by the way.
     
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    Should be within the next few days. I'm trying to figure out some plot devices and then I should be back on schedual.

    Thank you. :)
     
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    Probably the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, or one of them anyway. Keep up the awesome work. And don't just dissapear like most great people on the internet...
     
  5. Yeko

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    Thank you. :)

    Great people? *Blush* I'll defanitly finish this fic. In fact there will prolly be a few sequals and side stories. :)
     
  6. Rotc Girl

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    Just read 29, w00t. It's great. Please finish the story and not leave us hanging like some authors.
     
  7. Yeko

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    Lol. Don't worry chapter 30 is already 700 words in. :)
     
  8. Rotc Girl

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    Yeah *does happy dance* when will it be up?
     
  9. Yeko

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    Hopefully by the weekend. :)
     
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    Hey, just read the first chapter and this is really good. The writing is brilliant and I wish there were more authors like you out there. I'm a slow reader so it'll take me a while to read it all but with so many chapters, i'll still be happy
     
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    Wow... "worships"..

    I wish i could write like you.. It allways seems that other people get the great ideas :p I loved the part about Naruto and Sasuke being brothers..
    If all of this was original, you could have published it.. And i would have bought it :D

    By all means.. Write more... Please:)
     
  12. Yeko

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    Thank you very much! smile-big Oh, and I checked out your fic in your sig. I've only read the first chapter, but I'm lovin it. :)

    LOL. :)

    smile-big Hope you'll still think that way if I get the novel I'm writing published. I tell ya, it's so much harder than writing fanfic. *dies* Lol.
     
  13. Abscon

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    Whats your book about?.. Hope you get it published...

    Are you a professional writer, or havent you quit you day job yet? :p
     
  14. Yeko

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    :) It's called Daughter of Atlantis. Here's the summary: Samantha is a 22 year-old woman with psychic powers. She has no idea why until she finds a letter from her deceased mother. It says she is descended from an ancient bloodline. She wants to know more, but the secrets of her blood could cost her, her life.....

    Me too. *Prays*

    I wish I was a professional. I've had a couple of poems published, but that doesn't really count. As for my day job, Lol. My 5 year old daughter is my day job. :)
     
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    Sounds like a cool book. When will the next chapter of the fanfic be up? i cant wait.. Keep it up. :)
     
  16. Yeko

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    Workin' on it. Lol. It's up to 1200 words, but I just got an email from Anime Central saying I need to take my studio logo out of my AMV before they'll allow it in the contest. So I need to spend some time on that tonight.
     
  17. Rotc Girl

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    Haven't read it yet, my computer just let me on line, but I'm goin' to read it now.

    I hate to ask this, but did you put chapter 30 on your home page? My computer won't load Fanfiction.net for some odd reason. Or have you just not posted it yet? 'Cause my computer's been screwy lately....
     
  18. Yeko

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    chapter 30 isn't up yet. I have a cold right now so I don't have the energy to write. Hopefully it will be ready soon.
     
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    Oh, ok. Thanks, I thought that my computer was being stupid again.
     
  20. Abscon

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    Hey.. Chapter 30 is up = )... Cool..Wye dident you tell use : /

    Anyway... Good chapter. I like your ideas, very original : ) Pretty well written :p Keep on writing! Cant wait for next chapter
     
  21. Yeko

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    Gomen ne. I blanked. ^_^;;

    Thanks. :) I try. It's really hard with so much fic out there so I really appreaciate the compliment.
     
  22. Rotc Girl

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    Spoiler:
    oro and kabuto's deaths were very satisfying

    Chapter 30 was great, when will the next one be up?
     
  23. Yeko

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    heh heh. Thank you. :) And thank you for using the spoiler tags.

    Hopefully soon. I already have 600 words of 31 written. :) I have some things to finish on the radioplay (I have a whole cast to do the voices and everything), then I can get back to writing.
     
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    oh, you're welcome and i can't wait for the next chapter.
     
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    hey. i've been on these forums for a while now, but stupidly only just looked in this section the other night.
    and i found your chapters, and i stayed up for hours reading them!!!! damn you. (didn't get to sleep till 2 in the morning because i couldn't tear myself away)

    anyways, after reading how much you like reviews i just want to say how amazing i think they are - you've got a really gripping sense of writing!
    and i can't wait to read more.
    thanks again.
     
  26. Yeko

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    Lol. Gomen. :amuse

    Thank you very much! :) I hope my original novel gets as much attention. smile-big
     
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    When will your novel come out? and what's it on?
     
  28. Yeko

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    It's called "Daughter of Altantis".

    Summary:

    Samantha is a 22 year-old taijutsu instructor with psychic powers. On her 22nd birthday she finds a letter from her deceased mother. It says she is descended from an ancient bloodline. She wants to know more, but the secrets of her blood could cost her, her life.....

    As for a release date. I have no idea. Defanitly not till I finish COLAD. I can't concentrait on 2 stories at once.

    Glad to know there's interest in it. :)
     
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    cool. thats the first ive heard of it. (part from that fact your writing a novel)
    is that to do with naruto or just ninjas in general?
    & will it be on the internet, or physically published?
     
  30. Yeko

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    Lol. neither. This is an original story. Meaning all the characters and plotline are mine. Samantha is a taijutsu instructor who is an anime fan though. :)

    I willl post the first 6 chapters on fictionpress.net If people wanna read the rest, they have to buy the hand bound books I'm going to produce. I don't know how succesful that method will be but I wanna give it a try. smile-big
     
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