This is my fanfiction baby. I'm really shy of putting this up, to be honest. I would like some comments/opinions so I'm posting it here. Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated! Link to story: Summary: If you get close to people, let if you make them special to you, you can lose them. This is a story about Asuma and Kurenai and awkwardness and friendship. And maybe, just maybe, something more. Rating: T for language and violence (so far) The fic also has bits of Kakashi, Gai, Team 8, and Team 10 love. It's kind of bittersweet in tone, I try not to let it get too sappy. I'd really like some feedback about what works and what doesn't. Is it too wordy? Do the characters think to themselves too much? Feel free to give me your thoughts! Thanks! I posted the first three chapters here on the forum, but since the chapters are long they will take two or three messages to get the whole thing up. Because of this, I think it's better for you to check the story out on if you want to read more, because it's more reader-friendly. However, the first bit is here for you to read as a teaser, I guess. I hope you like it.