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Finding Love in the Dark....[NaruHina,ShikaTema,SasuSaku, others.]

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Anime_Girl_PR, Jun 4, 2007.

  1. Anime_Girl_PR New Member

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    Well Hello Everyone, I'm new in Naruto Forums and I Love a lot of Pairings so I posibly I'm gonna make like a 100 histories..........Just Kidding.


    Characters:
    [They're OOC]

    Hyuga Hinata:15 years old
    Sabaku no Temari:15 years old
    Haruno Sakura:15 years old
    TenTen:15 years old
    Yamanaka Ino:15 years old
    Kin:16 years old
    Tayuya:17 years old
    Ayame:17 years old
    Karin:16 years old
    Kurenai:24 years old
    Anko:24 years old.
    Tsunade:53 years old

    Uzumaki Naruto:17 years old
    Uchiha Sasuke:17 years old
    Inuzuka Kiba:17 years old
    Rock Lee:17 years old
    Nara Shikamaru:17 years old
    Akimichi Chouji:17 years old
    Sabaku no Gaara:16 years old
    Sabaku no Kankuro:18 years old
    Aburame Shino:18 years old
    Hyuga Neji:18 years old
    Uchiha Itachi:19 years old
    Kabuto:22 years old
    Sasori:19 years old
    Hidan:21 years old
    Deidara:21 years old
    Tobi:28 years old
    Kakashi:29 years old
    Asuma:29 years old
    Gai:30 years old
    Iruka:25 years old
    Jiraiya:53 years old
    Orochimaru:53 years old
    Suigetsu:22 years old
    Jugo:23 years old

    Chapter 1


    It was summer Everyone was taking a break they were in the beautiful island of Puerto Rico.
    They were in "El Conquistador" and the suites have 2 beds each one.

    It was 12:00 pm they were in the big pool.

    Sasuke, Naruto, KIba, Shino, Shikamaru, Jugo, Siuigetsu, Chouji, Neji, Rock Lee, Gaara, Kankuro. Were outside the pool sitting in a big table staring at the girls inside the pool.

    Neji: I love this! we are just chilling ourselves and we are just fett apart of the most beautiful kunoichis in Bikini.

    Gaara:Don't anyone of you dare look at my little sister!

    Kankuro:Yeah! That Sh!t

    Neji: Well then you and Gaara don't even dare think about Hinata!

    Naruto:C'mon what damage is going to do to just look for a little while.

    Kiba:Besides who can help not to look, I mean look at them they're hot as hell.

    Meanwhile

    Hinata, Sakura, Temari, TenTen, Karin, Kin and Tayuya were getting out of the water and Heading toward The boys.

    Sakura: Come, you guys aren't going in?

    Neji:Ha, you're gonnna hve to drag us in

    Tayuya:Oh-Yeah? Fine!

    With that say she take Kiba and Lee by the hand and Throw them to the pool.

    Kin was next taking Gaara with Her.

    Sakura take Sasuke and Nauto with her.

    Karin take Jugo with her.

    Tayuya Take Chouji by the hand and throw him, But he drag her too.

    TenTen take Neji and Kankuro by the hand and throw hersel to the pool with them.

    Temari throw Shikamaru.

    Hinata throw Shino and after she Get in the pool.

    Temari: Ha, That's a victory to us.

    Suigetsu:Ha, You forgot about me babe.

    He push her to the pool and after jump in it.

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    Someone in one of the suites with view to the pool and the ocean was seing them with a smirk in his face.

    Deidara: Let them have fun cuz' when they're sleeping we will hit and were gonna.... let's say ruin their fun.

    Itachi:What do you think about a massive massacre?

    Sasori: It will be fun to kill at least 1 of them, give the Warning and taking at least 4 people with us.

    Hidan:Do not forget that Karin, Jugo and Suigetsu are going to help us to back stab them.

    Itachi:You're right i forgot, Do they know er are going to attack at 12:30 am?

    Deidara:Yeah, They do, H-mm.

    Tobi:perfect.

    Deidara: So tonight huh, H-mm.

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    Meanwhile​

    Kakashi was upstairs heading towards Tsunade's suite.

    Knock.

    Knock.

    Knock.

    Tsunade open the door.

    Tsunade:Kakashi? What are you doing here?

    Kakashi: Tsunade something it's not right.

    Tsunade: What do you mean something it's not right?

    Kakashi:I don't know what is it, I...I..I just..uhm....never mind. Sorry for interrupting you.

    Kakshi was about to open the door when Tsunade Talk.

    Tsunade: I Feel weird too.

    Kakashi: Huh? Are you serious?

    Tsunade: Yes, I.. I tought it was just me, But now that you tell me that too, We are gonaa have to be careful with them.

    Kakshi:I have the feeling that something that has been waiting so long it's gonna happen tonight.

    Tsunade: Don't worry, I will talk to the security in case of anything weird.

    Kakshi:Oh, Ok Thanks., I'll be leaving now.

    With those words Kakashi went out of the room and headed downstairs.

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    Meanwhile​

    Sasuke drag Sakura by the wrist outside the pool and to a palm.

    Sakura: S-S-Sasuke...W-What's Wrong?

    Sasuke was trying to hold some tears.

    Sakura could notice this and was even more nervous.

    Sasuke: Sakura.. I...I.....

    Sasuke was triyng to tell her, But the words won't come out.

    Sasuke:Sakura.....If something happens today, I-I-I-I just want to tell you that I'm sorry and that I have my own reasons Even though I Know I Might hurt you I'll be back when everything it's over.

    Sakura:Sasuke What are you talking about?

    Sasuke: What I'm saying Is that I Love you, and That I'm sorry.

    No more words were needed he take her by the waist and give her a light kiss on the lips. Soon the kiss was something passionate when she Put her arms around his neck. Soon they break apart for air.

    Sakura:Sasuke, I Love you too!

    They united themselves in another pasionate kiss.


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    Meanwhile​

    Naruto and Hinata were in a restaurant.

    Naruto: So Hinata, What are you going to do tonight?

    Hinata: I-I-I..Uhm..I-.......Nothing W-Why?

    Naruto: I.uhm, I wanted to know if you would like to come with me to go see a movie in my room.

    Hinata: In your room?

    Naruto:Yes, so.. what do you think?

    Hinata: I..Uhm.Okay

    Naruto: So..........um.....Let's go shop?

    Hinata:G-Great.

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    Meanwhile​

    TenTen and Temari were outside the pool talking, While at the othrside were Neji and Shikamaru.


    With TenTen and Temari

    TenTen: So Temari when are you going to tell Shikamaru you love him?

    Temari: What makes you think I'm gonna tell him?

    TenTen: C'mon Temari you have to tell him.

    Temari: I guess i'll tell him later. And when are you going to tell Neji?

    TenTen blush

    TenTen: I Don't like that freak!

    Temari: Yah, Yeah I Forgot.

    Temari say that with a lot of sarcasm.


    With Shikamaru and Neji

    Shikamaru: Hey Neji, do you think i should tell Temari I love her.

    Neji: Actually i was going to talk with TenTen about my feelings right now. Yes i think you should tell her.

    Shikamaru:Then let's go.

    Shikamaru and Neji started walking towards Temari and TenTen.

    Suigetsu who was watching close to Temari and TenTen take action first.

    Suigetsu: Hey Temari, Want to go and eat something.

    Tenten slap Temari in the hand lightly making her remember that Shikamaru was walking toward them.

    Temari: Ehh..I-uhm.Eh........

    Shikamaru: Hey Temari want something to eat.

    Temari: As matter or fact, I Do but with neither one of you.

    Neji: Ten, I want to talk to you.

    TenTen: Oh Sure.

    They leave

    Temari started walking toward the Hotel, but was stopped by Shikamaru's hand.

    Shikamaru: Are you okay?

    Temari: I wanna talk to you.

    They both say it whispering.

    Suigetsu: Hey Babe why don't you talk to me, Did I Do something wrong?

    Shikamaru look back at Temari to see if it was true.

    Temari: I'm not your Babe, Ok.

    Suigetsu grab her by the wais so that her body was close against his. Wih no more words he kiss her.

    Shikamaru: So you were not his babe, But you don't mind to kiss him.

    Temari finally could break free from him.

    Temari: Shikamaru, I am not with him, The person who I love is you, Lazy @ss

    Shikamaru: Yeah right, I completely believe you.

    Shikamaru leave runing and calling Chouji to wait for him.

    Temari tried to go behind him, but Suigetsu grab her hard by the hand.

    Suigetsu: You will be with me wether you like it or not.

    Temari: Leave me go! You're hurting me.

    Jugo was passing by and look at Temari strugling trying to break free from Suigetsu.

    Jugo: Hey Sui let her go, You know you are gonna have her all by yourself.

    Temari: Never.

    Suigetsu: We'll see

    Temari leave trynig to search TenTen but find hersel with Sakura.

    They both went in to the Hotel.

    Sakura started to tell Temari what Sasuke told her and what happened


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    Meanwhile

    It was 12:29 pm 6 misterious figures were heading toward the ladies suites.

    Itachi: 4 people everyone make your choice.

    Deidara: Ok!


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    Meanwhile

    Sasuke: We should attack now!

    Suigetsu: Hey Sasuke..........um.....can i take someone with us.

    Sasuke: Who?

    Jugo: Temari.

    Sasuke: To What?

    Karin: He oviously want her.

    Sasuke: Okay lets get moving.


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    Meanwhile

    Hinata and Sakura were on their suites when they herad someone knocking on the door.

    Sakura: I'll take it.

    When she open the dorr someone hit her and 2 more people enter the room 1 grabbing Sakura and puting her in his shoulder and the another one taking Hinata the same way.

    Sasori: 2 more.

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    Meanwhile

    Since the suites were close Temari and TenTen heard Hinata screaming and went to Sakura and Hinata suite.

    Temari: I'll go you stay here.

    TenTen: Ok

    Temari see that the door was open so she decide to enter when she get in she saw 1 men with Hinata in one shoulder and Sakura in the other.

    When she try to run out of the room Itachi grab her by the waist from behind and put his arm in her mouth so she won't scream. She try to break free but couldn't.

    Itachi: Sasori give me the sheet i have to cover her.

    Sasori give Temari the sheet and saw how he tied a little towel around her mouth so she won't talk and after he put the sheet aroun her and they went out of the room.

    Itachi: Did you let the note there.

    Sasori: Yes, Now let's get Kurenai.

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    Meanwhile

    TenTen stoped exactly in front of Kakashi's room

    Knock, Knock, Knock, Knock.

    Kakashi opened the door.

    Kakashi: TenTen what's wrong.

    TenTen: They take her, they take them. they...

    TenTen was sobbing and crying Kakashi couldn't undestand what she was trying to tell.

    When she told him he told her to get Tsunade and tell her that he was going to bring them back.

    Kakshi found himself with Asuma and they both get to the room and follow to Downstairs And there they found Itachi and Sasori carying 3 womens in their shoulders.

    Kakashi: And what do you think you're doing.

    Sasuke: Nothing that you care!

    Kakashi: Huh?

    Sasuke went runing by behind and tackle Kakashi in the leg making him fall.

    Jugo Try to tackle Asuma but he Dodged him.

    While Jugo and Asuma were Fighting Itachi and Sasori escape.

    Jugo take out a Kunai And Dug it straightly in Asuma's chest.

    Sasuke: 1 down another to go.

    Orochimaru: Don't waste your time let's go Sasuke.

    Karin: He's right, Let's go.

    Orochimaru: But Before.....

    He look at Kakashi in the floor and dug a Kunai in his arm. a poisoned one.

    Suigetsu: Ha-Ha in 24 hours you'll be death the same as your friend.

    Tsunade, Gai and Genma finally reached the scene, but they did it to late.

    Everyone was down in shock with what just happened.

    Kakashi was taken to the Hospital, The same with Asuma's lifeless body.

    Gaara went running to Tsunade.

    Gaara:Where's my sister, What happen to her?

    TenTen: Gaara they take her and Hinata And Sakura.

    Kankuro: Who? Who took them?

    TenTen: Itachi and Sasori.

    Kurenai: They left a note and Kakshi was poisoned and Asuma is at the verge of dying. Kakashi told me that Sasuke, Karin, Suigetsu and.......and........and Orochimaru. Teh were the one's that attack Kakahsi and Asuma while they were trying to stop Itachi and Sasori.

    Naruto: I'm gonna kill them.

    Sakura was crying.

    Sakura : That's what Sasuke told me about.

    Tsunade: What, What did he told you?

    Sakura : He told me that He loved me, and tell me to forgive him, he also told me that he was going to come back when he did what he needed to do.

    Tsunade: Ok everyone go back to your rooms and sleep, We will begin searching Temari, Hinata and Sakura.

    Everyone left, except Shikamaru.

    Shikamaru was crying and sobbing.

    Shikamaru: T-Tsunade....T-T-sunade.. Temari will be alright, right?

    Tsunade: Yes she will i promise you, I'm gonna find her........... You love her right?

    Shikamaru: Yes, and the worst.............. is that........... I ............Never ..Told her.

    He talk between sobs.

    Neji: Everything will be alright were gonna find them, ...listen Shikamaru Hinata is there too and I'm gonna make everything to find her. You need to be strong.

    Naruto: Who can be strong? Everyone left me.

    Naruto began crying.

    Naruto: Sasuke, Sakura and now Hinata..T-T-They.....all.........left....me.

    Shikamaru: We are going to find them, As Neji say we need to be strong.

    Naruto: Ok, Neji...are you crying?

    Neji turn around hiding his tears.

    Neji: Of course not.

    Shikamaru: Don't deny it.

    Neji break down. TenTen catch him in her arms.

    Neji: I....I...I-I'm a dissapointment I didn't protect her......That was my job......Not only my job was my reason to live..to protect her.

    Tsunade: I understand your emotions, Go and sleep for a little while.

    TenTen: Neji come with me.

    She and Neji went to her romm where they tried to sleep a little.

    Naruto and Shikamaru went to Naruto's room to also try to sleep.

    Downstairs

    Kurenai: This is bad Tsunade

    Tsunade : We are gonaa findt them. I swear.





    Until here chapter # 1 hope you guys like it I will try to update soon tell me what you think, Sorry for grammatical errors and any doubt tell me

    Bye
    Take Care
     
  3. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    thats very good for a newbie and I like it.
     
  4. Corey45 hi! im corey

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    hmm a little rough around the edges but for a 1st time your doing a very good job. Im sure someone will get in here and help you out a bit. Im not the best at critiqing.
     
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