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Guy with a sword

Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by Skoemie, Oct 19, 2006.

  1. Skoemie Sandaime Skoemie

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    Need some comment and advice for this one...

     
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  2. SkriK Whuzat?

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    His left hand's fingers seem to be missing some shadow that makes them look round. Nice pose and coloring though.
     
  3. Skoemie Sandaime Skoemie

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    Thnx for the comment... Tomorow I wil contineu on the art and iff it looks any better I will post it again...
     
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    i like your cell shading style, but work on anatomy.. alot
     
  5. 寫輪眼 ♪~

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    Is good but...
    -His left elbow joint part i chopped off...hmm why? XD
    -I know his sword is pointing forward, that's why he's got the shadow on his face right? If so i guess the way to solve it is to draw the sword alittle lower b/c at the moment it looks like the sword is pointing backwards instead. XD
     
  6. Skoemie Sandaime Skoemie

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    Couldend draw the elbow in a way that I liked it so gone it was XD... and it's my first try on this kinda pose... so I am working on it and I ain't that good at atonemy yet
     
  7. Mew♥ Reading fanfics :D

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    Its good, but the elbow could be rounded....:amuse
     
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