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Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Mushroom-Chan, Oct 15, 2006.

  1. Mushroom-Chan Gah Goo

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    Epiloge
    Love... What is the meaning of love? The girl had forgotten the meaning long ago.
    Flashback
    "I'll be fine NiNi-Chan," her older brother said.
    End of Flashback
    That memory stung now. The memories of ever caring were slowly breaking her.
    Flashback
    There had been a knock at the door. Nikki opened it. I wish I had never opened the door. A man in a chunin vest stood before her.
    "Are you Nikki Hawatchi," the man asked. Nikki nodded.
    "Your brother Daisuke Hawatchi was killed in action." Nikki slammed the door in his face. She ran into her room and flung herself in bed and cried. After that the feeling of falling down an endless pit came. Falling..... More falling.... Then darkness.
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    Nikki
    Age:12
    Hair color: light brown
    Clothes: She wears a black tank top, her pants are black, and her shoes are the regular ninja sandals.
    Weapons: Kunia and shurieken. (Shurieken?) She also can call on a ax and sword.
    Hobbies: Taking walks

    Lonely
    Nikki was walking down the street alone. She was always alone. She stared at the ground as she walked. The lights and sounds of the village never interested her. Why? Why did my whole family die? And why did I have to be adopted by some family that was killed along with there clan? Anger rose through her body. They all left me to die alone. Nikki walked past the Ninja Academy. She didn't feel like visiting her old school. Nikki sighed. She despised almost everything. Curse life itself! The few people she cared about were always distant to her...
    No one gives a crap about what happens to me! "Don't let your anger consume you, or your bound to be killed," Kakashi said. Nikki jumped.
    "Jerk." Nikki glared at Kakashi. Stupid Sensei. He scared me. Nikki elbowed Kakashi in the stomach. When nothing happened she glared at him. Stupid strong Sensei.
    "Weakling," Kakashi said in an emotionless voice. I can't believe I actually look up to this jerk. Nikki started walking again hoping that her stupid Sensei would leave but he followed her. This continued for a few minutes. Nikki stopped dead in her tracks.
    "What do you want," Nikki said. Kakashi smiled.
    "You look lonely, do you want to come train Team 7," Kakashi asked.
    Nikki smirked. Naruto and Sakura are probably ticked that he is eight hours late.
    "Sure I will." The two walked toward the training grounds.
     
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  2. InoSakuShine Sakura's Inner

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    I like this fic i canr wait to see what happens. Your character Nikki is like almost the EXACT SAME to a fictional character I made up WITH THE NAME NIKKI!!! So odd!! And I swear I put her in the exact same situation!!!!!! Weird...are you my alter ego?? :)
     
  3. Ral I don't

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    nikki....well theres a person that i know that uses the name nikki....but i can't tell u that yet....btw nice story!!!!keep up the good work i hope to see more storries!!!:nuts
     
  4. Mushroom-Chan Gah Goo

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    *GASP*

    :nuts Wow really! Thats shocking! *Gets struck by lightning* That was an electrifyin experience! I'm almost done with chappie 2! tHANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT! ANd I don't know about the alter ego thing... *Shrugs*
     
  5. Mushroom-Chan Gah Goo

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    Thanks for everyones support!!!
     
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    Your story made Kakashi seem so heartless in the beginning, which he isn't. ehh, I suppose this is fanfiction since a 12 year old genin wouldn't be able to join Team 7 as Sasuke was still part of Team 7.
     
  7. Mushroom-Chan Gah Goo

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    *Sweatdrops* I'm kind of a bad writer when it comes to personalities...
     
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    Yet again Mushroom-Chan, you make a sad story, your stories rock!!
     
  9. Mushroom-Chan Gah Goo

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    Chappie 2 go up!
    Understanding

    Nikki was watching Kakashi train Team7. Naruto jumped in front of Kakashi.
    “I’m gonna kick your but,” Naruto yelled to Kakashi as he charged toward him. Kakashi disappeared and Naruto looked dumbstruck.
    “1,000 years of pain,” Kakashi said as he appeared behind Naruto and did his infamous attack. Naruto jumped up in the air and screamed. Nikki smirked. What an idiot.
    “Hey you,” Naruto yelled to Nikki. Nikki closed her eyes. Sometimes I wish he’d just SHUT UP!
    “What do you want Narutard,” Nikki asked. A large anger mark appeared on Naruto’s head. Nikki sweat dropped. Impulsive idiot.
    “Nikki you listen!!!! I challenge you to a fight and if I win you call me Naruto-Sama, and you take me out for ramen!!!!!!!” Nikki rolled her eyes. Stupid one track minded boy.
    “Your on loser,” Nikki said emotionlessly.
    Kakashi sighed. They seem like friends but then they are at each other’s throats… Typical Naruto and Nikki.
    “All right you two,” Kakashi said in a monotone voice. “I’ll let you two fight but just don’t kill each other.” Naruto punched the air.
    “All right!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Kakashi-Sensei,” Yelled Naruto. Nikki rolled her eyes. Stupid Naruto.
    “You two are at it again,” Sakura said. “Sasuke, Tell them to stop it!” Sasuke glared at Sakura.
    “Sakura, leave Nikki alone,” said Sasuke in a low voice. Nikki raised her eyebrows. He never stick up for me. Although…. He probably wants to see Naruto get the crud beaten out of him. Typical Sasuke. Instead of commenting on Sasuke she wanted to toy around with Sakura’s mind.
    “Hey biiiiiig brow,” Nikki said. “Why don’t you stop swooning over Sasuke and train. Be useful for once and get your head out of the clouds.” A large anger mark appeared on Sakura’s forehead.
    “Nikki I train plenty,” Sakura growled. “I could take you on any day Goth girl!” Now Nikki was mad. She hated Sakura. Darn it! She is such a moron! I’m no flipping Goth Girl!!! No Nikki chill. Don’t let that little brat get to you! Keep it calm, cool, and collected.
    “Okay I’m gonna go take a walk,” Nikki said in a low voice. Nikki walked away. Naruto was ticked that he didn’t get to fight Nikki. But he wanted to make his friend feel better so he followed her.
    “What do you want,” Nikki asked coldly. Naruto smiled. Now what can I do to make her feel better??? Oh, I know! I know! Ramen! I’ll take her out to eat Ramen! Everyone likes ramen!
    “To make you feel better I’ll take you out to eat ramen,” Naruto yelled happily. Nikki raised an eyebrow. Since when did he care about me???
    “Fine, as long as it shuts you up.” They walked to the ramen shop in complete silence. Silence Nikki liked silence. She remembered the day when IT happened….
    The Kyubbi attacked. His blood red eyes stared into Nikki’s. Nikki stared in horror as his foot came down towards her. I’m going to die! I’m going to die! I’m going to die! I’m going to---
    “Nikki,” Naruto yelled. “We are here so stop lolly gagging in your own world and tell me what kind of ramen you want!!” Nikki was going to yell at him….. But something stopped her. His smile… His kind smile. He only wanted to help her. Naruto, could you actually understand me???
    “Beef ramen please,” Nikki said. Naruto stared at Nikki. She is actually being NICE??? Naruto ran up to the counter.
    “Hey old man,” Naruto yelled. Two beef ramens!” Naruto and Nikki sat down. After five minutes of waiting the ramen was set on the counter. They started eating. This is actually really yummy. Nikki thought.
    “Hey Nikki,” Naruto asked. “Feeling any better?” Nikki looked at Naruto. No one has ever asked me that… Not in a long time at least.
    “Naruto, may I ask you a question?” Naruto smiled. Is Nikki opening up to me?!
    “Naruto, c-could you listen to my thoughts someday? Someday… Could you listen to me when I ramble on about my pitiful past?”
    Nikki’s head was down. She wanted so badly for Naruto to say yes. They had always been friends…. But would he still be her friend if he knew how she was? When Nikki looked at Naruto he had a wide grin on his face.
    “Of course I will Nikki!” “We’re best friends!” H-He cares about me! I feel like crying…. No do not cry! No! No! No! Nikki smiled a true smile. She hadn’t done that in what seemed like for ever.
    “Naruto, I finally understand something that I haven’t before…. Thank you.”
     
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