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I Wrote a Short Story... Please Be Harsh

Discussion in 'Reader's Corner' started by yuLeopard, Jun 2, 2018.

  1. yuLeopard Pink Haired Pirates

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    First of a bunch of short stories. Please be harsh on my writing, all I get are compliments and I want to improve. This story is about how a young man plagued with visions was turned into something more.

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    It seems pretty good, but a tad bit short for the first chapter.
     
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