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My character creation: Koumaru Hyoujin

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Sub-Zero, Jun 2, 2007.

  1. Sub-Zero

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    I did this drawing in about 15 minutes.

    Name: Koumaru Hyoujin
    Age: 27
    Village: formerly Kirigakure
    Current Rank: S-Rank Missing nin
    Reached genin at 8, chunin at 10, and jonin at 12.

    This is a shinobi I thought up; his name is Koumaru Hyoujin, and he hails from Kirigakure. He was once one of the most powerful and respected jonin in all the village, but when the Mizukage ordered the extermination of kekkei genkai to prevent wars, he swore vengeance, becoming one of the legendary Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. He created his swords from the steel of an ancient sword that belonged to his father, who was the leader of their clan, which was exterminated except for him because the Koumaru clan had the genetic ability that gave them mastery of the water element. Up until the extermination of his clan, Hyoujin had hid his kekkei genkai and was able to become a jonin in the village. After the extermination of his clan, he swore he would kill the Mizukage himself. After their attempt on the Mizukage's life failed, Hyoujin, along with the rest of the Swordsmen, fled Kirigakure. He went into exile, where he lives in solitude amongst an ancient temple in the outskirts of the Country of Water that was once affiliated with the Koumaru clan. Hyoujin's two swords are very unique in that they can be natured with elemental chakra; they are connected with chkara strings, which is partially the reason why his swords can receive elemental nature; the other reason being that the steel used in the swords is able to emit chakra provided by the wielder. The one in his right hand receives water nature and the one in his left hand receives wind nature. He is able to use hyoton techniques because of his kekkei genkai and his wind nature training, which he had done as a chunin in order to attain the rank of jonin. Another cool fact about the swords is that he can clash them together to release hyoton techniques. Naturally, he can release fuuton and suiton techniques from his swords as well.

    I have never created a character before this, so be nice.:amuse

    Well, here ya go:

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    +reps appreciated smile-big
     
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    I use photobucket
     
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    Ok, thanks.:amuse

    EDIT: It's up now! yey
     
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    Woah, he looks intimidating. The shape of his arms really weird me out, they look more like clubs.
     
  5. Sub-Zero

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    Yea, I guess you're right.. I was focusing more on the face and swords, sorry.. :p
     
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    Thanks.. I don't think I'm very good compared to most of the people on nf.:amuse
     
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    he scares me....but It's great!!!!
     
  9. Shirozaki

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    I think this should go to the Original Artworks section since technically, it isn't a fanart of any Naruto character.

    Regardless, I think you should fix the nose part. And if you wanted him to look more of a villain, he should have slightly slit eyes, not big ones. And the arms and legs aren't in proportion.. you need more practice. :amuse
     
  10. Sub-Zero

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    I never said he was a villain.
    Yes, I know I need more practice..

    Damn freeloaders, I want +rep! lol, jkjk seriously tho, cise me dat rep, lol
     
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    Agreed Eyes are supposed thin and dark for villains. Also villan's face has sharp, angular features. Anyway frightening character.
     
  12. Sub-Zero

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    Goddammit! He's not evil, he's just misunderstood! Seriously though, I never said he was a villain. The only reason he became a Seven Swordsmen of the Mist was to avenge the murder of his clan at the hands of the Mizukage (he ordered their extermination because they had kekkei genkai).

    EDIT: New version is up. I fixed (or attempted to?) the legs and nose.
     
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    Still, its a good drawing. Seems like a cool character.
     
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    hes pretty sweet, i just like the fact hes wearing a mist head band.
     
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    He looks so fierce, is he a badass?
     
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    You guys are freeloaders.. +reps appreciated!:notrust haha

    Yes, he is a bad ass. However, he is not a villain.
     
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    erm yeah thats nice.. do you draw a lot ? its better than anything i could do
     
  18. Sub-Zero

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    Well, I've always been talented at art, but I don't (nor am I very good..) draw manga style that much. Thanks for the praise, although I don't really think it's that good..:amuse
     
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    ohh you've got to start posting more work.
     
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    Maybe I woud if people showed their appreciation.. (+rep)

    Actually I don't draw seriously that much; most of the time I just doodle. If you guys really like it that much, I'll start drawing more.:amuse
     
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    Like your drawing :)
    I like this idea, I'm going to make my own now.

    *Reps you
     
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    what the hell!!!
    * hides behind bed *
    nice work
     
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    Don't copy me at all, or I'll kill you (jk, but don't)!:amuse
     
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    :huh awww i was joking lol... not really bothered enough to rep you. i do rep really awesome fanart i f i can be bothered. You dont have to post if you dont want to
     
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    Haha, I was kidding.:laugh I post what I draw if I think it is decent enough.:amuse
     
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