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My pics of One Piece

Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by w1p3r, Oct 18, 2006.

  1. w1p3r

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    Here are some pictures of One Piece
    and there would be more soon=)








    so what do you think???
     
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  2. Ryoshi

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    Nice job. HEY DID YOU COPY! Oh well, hehehe the world is copied. CHOPPA! I like them.
     
  3. Mrs. Hatake

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    OMG I like the ACE one *fangurl scream* XDDD
    Its really good. Well they all are, better than what I could do~
     
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    Pros:
    • I like the exact carbon copy of the characters, it really does look it's right out of the manga. However, you will soon need to develop your own style, and influence it into the OnePiece characters.
    • Anatomy is decent.
    • The profile view of the characters are real nice, adds in the greatness of the piece.
    • Detail is good.

    Cons:
    • Nami's head is abit offset, you can fix that by drawing the chin closer to the neck.
    • Her neck is abit too long.
    • The background of Nami: her facial structue is quite cramped, I really don't know what to tell you without ruining the entire piece.
    • Ace's muscle tone looks extremely fake. I don't know if that's the real artist's style of doing that, but it looks like lines of boxes. You can add depth and shading to make it look abit more real.

    How to improve
    • By studying some depth and shadowing, you can increase the boldness and perception your work can bring forth.
      Right now, the characters look like they have mud or dirt on them. Using an imaginary sun at the cornet could help alot.
    Good work! And keep trying!
     
  5. w1p3r

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    hey...thank you all for replays
    and your thoughts...
    copy:since this was my firts atempt
    to draw one piece I didn't really copy it..
    I only have some photos of them on the pc
    and than by watching all I made out this:amuse
    I know it isn't perfect but I hope
    that some day it would be at least near:p

    (more stuff coming today....but later)
     
  6. w1p3r

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    here are more pictures of one piece...:amuse







    coming more...
     
  7. w1p3r

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    here are the last ones of ...
    so...any other thoughts?
    (I really liked Haruka's replay:amuse )





     
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    nice wiper! :)

    i notice that the proportions between the legs and upper body seem a tad off
     
  9. w1p3r

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    well...the legs were allways my biggest problem...
    I allways make them to short and then it becomes like you sad:(
    but I'll do my best to betterize myself:amuse
     
  10. Mrs. Hatake

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    THe hands are the hardest for ME I just can't ever seem to get them right no matter how many times I fix them. I was about to go into a mad fit if you left out Zoro XD
    But really they are good. I like them, better than I could ever do!~
     
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    Really cool stuff
     
  12. Loki

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    Cewl man!Didn't know you could draw =]
     
  13. w1p3r

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    thanks for the compliment:amuse
    well...when I started drawing my weak point were the lags
    and the head too...but as I practiced more and more
    it becomes easy...expecialy the head...
    like 2 days ago I draw for the first time naruto
    or better his head...and I done it in 5 minutes...
    well it isn't the best I could do but for the first time
    I think it's more than good:p

    hehe...there are many special people, not only you:p
     
  14. Goblincar

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    wooooow pictures ROCKS!!!!!!! but i think you copyed it...they are just TOO GOOD to be made by your hand ;)...jsut kiddin..keep up the good work
     
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    those arent bad at all. nice drawings, shading is a bit rough but its all good.
     
  16. w1p3r

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    hehe...if you don't belive it come and see me drawing:amuse

    yeah...I don't know what happened to me
    expecialy for the last pic(Ace)...
    I just made tooooo much shades:huh :(

    but thanks to both of you:amuse
     
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    Definitely a nice job done here. Almost accurate.
     
  18. w1p3r

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    thanks Chamcham....I wonder why I don't think the same:huh :p
     
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