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Naruto 357 Translation by Nihongaeri

Discussion in 'Naruto Translations' started by Nihongaeri, Jun 8, 2007.

  1. Nihongaeri 大阪命!ナニワ最高!

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    Made a few corrections now that there's a good quality RAW. Should be good to go now!

    Number 357: Deidara vs Sasuke!!

    Page 1

    Text:
    Lick, lick, lick! Once you see all three tongues, it's all over. H'm!

    Page 2

    Frame 1, Text:
    Orochimaru now resides within Kabuto...!!

    Frame 2, Naruto:
    You... integrated him?

    Frame 3, Kabutomaru:
    Why the surprise... You see, I merely took part of Orochimaru-sama's remains after Sasuke killed him...

    Frame 4, Kabutomaru:
    And transplanted in into this body of mine, that's all

    Page 3

    Frame 2, Kabutomaru:
    That said, it's truly an amazing life force! I may have integrated it, but it's now trying to take over my body

    Frame 3, Yamato:
    You're crazy...

    Frame 4, Hinata:
    What's... that?

    Frame 5, Hinata:
    Byakugan!

    Frame 6, Hinata [thought] (I assume):
    It's already taken over nearly a third of his body...

    Page 4

    Frame 1, Kabutomaru:
    But part of me is doing everything it can to resist being taken over!

    Frame 2, Kabutomaru:
    I can truly sense that part that strives to surpass Orochimaru-sama

    Frame 4, Naruto:
    Heh

    Frame 5, Naruto:
    Then keep on striving, by all means! After we shut you away in Konoha's prison!!

    Page 5

    Frame 5, Naruto:
    Alright! We got him!!

    Frame 6, Hinata:
    Behind you!

    Page 6

    Frame 1, Kabutomaru:
    Hyaahahahahaa!

    Frame 2, Naruto:
    Dammit...

    Frame 3, Kabutomaru:
    After I become able to completely control Orochimaru-sama's power... I'll return to fight you, Naruto-kun

    Frame 4, Kabutomaru:
    But you'll be my second target... First I'll exact revenge on Orochimaru-sama's murderer, Sasuke-kun

    Frame 5, Kabutomaru:
    Until we meet again

    Page 7

    Frame 5, Deidara:
    Ah, the sharingan... No doubt this is Itachi's brother... And the very reason why he was able to kill Orochimaru was because of that Uchiha blood... H'm

    Frame 5, Deidara:
    A pathetic loser mistaking the gifts of his heredity for his own power

    Page 8

    Frame 2, Deidara:
    He's fast!

    Page 9

    Frame 1, Tobi:
    Huh?

    Frame 4, Sasuke:
    One down... You seem to like to talk, so I'll ask *you* about Itachi

    Page 10

    Frame 2, Sasuke:
    What's this...

    Frame 3, Deidara:
    What's up with you, Tobi! He may be a kid, but don't let your guard down, h'm!

    Frame 3, Tobi:
    Seriously, his shunshin jutsu is just too fast for us to deal with...

    Frame 5, Deidara:
    First I'll gauge his movement skills with chakra level C1...

    Page 11

    Frame 2, Deidara:
    Tobi, stand back!

    Frame 5, Tobi:
    Uh oh!

    Page 12

    Frame 5, Tobi:
    Woah! Sempai, timeout! Don't detonate them!!

    Page 13

    Frame 1, Deidara:
    Tch...

    Frame 2, Tobi:
    Sempaaii! Behind you!! Behind you!!

    Frame 4, Deidara:
    Ugh!

    Frame 6, Deidara:
    KATSU

    Page 14

    Frame 2, Tobi:
    Sempaaaiii!!

    Frame 3, Tobi:
    *sob sob* He was a strict sempai, but still a good one... I'll never forget you, Deidara-sempai...

    Frame 4, Deidara:
    Tobi, quit your whining!

    Frame 4, Tobi:
    Oh! ... You're alive

    Frame 5, Deidara:
    I managed to somehow get away with the push from the blast... I'm lucky I was only using the C1 chakra... H'm

    Page 15

    Frame 2, Deidara:
    His movement is definitely too fast

    Frame 3, Deidara:
    ... Which mean this fight calls for C2

    Frame 4, Tobi:
    Th... That's...

    Page 16/17

    Frame 1, Text:
    A massive dragon! Yet another explosive work of art... What is "that"!!?

    Frame 2, Tobi:
    Here we go! One of Deidara-sempai's specialty works of art, the C2 dragon!

    Frame 3, Sasuke:
    So he has the ability to make explosives with his palms...

    Frame 4, Deidara:
    You know what to do, Tobi!!

    Frame 5, Tobi:
    Got it covered, sempai! All ready for "that"...!

    Chapter Preview:
    Next Issue, Sasuke is trapped by Deidara...! "The terror of C2!!

    Mid-chapter Chapter Preview:
    Deidara vs Sasuke!! What becomes of this massive battle!?
     
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  2. Lord Jure Just another guy

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    Thanks man.

    *now reading*
     
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    Wow, you're fast man - great, thanks^^
     
  4. Hyuuga RIP Apoo and Astaroth

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    Thanks for the trans. :)
     
  5. ~E~ cause lil e won't do...

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    thanks sooo much!!!!
     
  6. Tobi @

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    Haaaa Tobiii!

    Hahaha!

    Thank you for tran! It makes my day~ ^^
     
  7. hazashi youre reading this

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  8. Banned Uchiha Itachi Banned

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    Kabutomaru? Why do you make up names ? I give this translation a 1/5 for making up character names.
     
  9. Lazlow I believe you

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  10. Namicho 愛は耐

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    ありがとう!!! :)
     
  11. abakuskulram Member

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  12. ♠Mr.Nibbles♠ Nibbles on Nipples

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  13. *Ex-PrinCeSs* ♥I'm a..

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    Finally a good trans! Poor Sasuke, I hope he gets out of Deideis trap!
     
  14. @lk3mizt Well-Known Member

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    thanks for the trans!! :p
     
  15. itoikenza 最偉剣坐

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    thankx! You made my day!
     
  16. Vandal Savage The Magician Supporting Staff

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    Thanks alot for the translation.
     
  17. Yuuko-Hime *La gentille petite folle * XD

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    Tobi is funny XD Thanks a lot for the translation!!^^
     
  18. Nedeti SENIOR MEMBER

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    arigato! now i finaly understood.
     
  19. Yakushi Kabuto Socks Activate! Shape of a

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    Oh, thank you so very much, and Kabutomaru's laugh makes me laugh.
     
  20. Yume "dude!"

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    thanks! glad to see you're back :D
     
  21. wiplok Wonderful.

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    thanks for the translation!
     
  22. Circe WONGA

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    So I suppose Kabuto will be the final villain. How cheap. U_U

    Anyway, thanks.
    EDIT:
    You're right. It's Kabuchimaru.

    Seriously..it is not that big a deal. U_U
     
  23. shintebukuro Well-Known Member

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    Could you explain this part a bit? Is Deidara confirming an advantage sharingan has specifically over Orochimaru, or just complaining about the advantages of the sharingan in general?

    Thanks.
     
  24. DethStryque *Murderous Intent*

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    My trans(more literal):
    Frame5, Deidara:
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    The thing that that killed Orochimaru. Thanks to the Uchiha blood

    Frame5, Deidara:
    A loser misunderstanding the blessings of his lineage (blood line).

    EDIT:
    If posting this in the thread of another translator is bad from, pls remove this.
     
  26. Nihongaeri 大阪命!ナニワ最高!

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    I'm reading it as, in the end, being little more than Deidara taunting and attempting to irk Sasuke before their battle.


    ... And, if I might be drastically frank, I also think that anyone thinking otherwise is in serious need of a reality check (sorry if that happens to stomp all over your interpretation, but it's just what I think... no hard feelings). :wink

    Although, now that I think of it, I think I'll change "his Uchiha blood" to "that same Uchiha Blood", for purposes of flow.
    No specific problems with the posting itself. Still, while I don't want to be overly harsh, you're translation is off in a number of ways, even for attempting to be more literal. More specifically, the major mistakes are the first sentence where I think you're misreading のも as もの and then the second sentence where I don't think you're understanding how だけの connects the first part to the second.

    More literal if I were to do it...

    "The sharingan, huh... There's no doubt this is Itachi's younger brother.... It's the case that being able to kill Orochimaru was also thanks to the blood of Uchiha... H'm... A damn "misunderstanding" fool with nothing more than the "blessings" of his his heredity"

    The most major part for the translator on the last line is deciding *what* it is that Deidara is suggesting that Sasuke is "misunderstanding". Based on the context of the previous sentence, I don't see any other way to interpret it other than what I did, though.
     
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    it seems accurate enough good job dude
     
  28. shintebukuro Well-Known Member

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    No offense taken, as I hate reading too far into things myself, but there are other members of this forum who I'm trying to shut up by asking the translator himself...

    By the way thanks for answering my question so quick, and in the future don't be the least bit hesitant to be as frank as you want with your opinion on your translations ;). I think a lot of people are aware of just how good you are at translating, and anybody who doesn't want your opinion on the meaning being conveyed, given your ability, probably deserves a harsh verbal beating anyway.

    Also, thanks for the help hupfinsgac, I appreciate it.
     
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    Cool, thanks a lot...
     
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