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Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by shadow_wisp, Jun 9, 2007.

  1. shadow_wisp

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    Hey,
    this is my newest signature for a while. Comments
    and criticisms welcome.
    Enjoy!

     
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    Looks nice but it's a bit too colorful. I can't recognize anything xcept a dog /wolf on the left.
     
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    I think it's nice:p
     
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    Okami ftw :amuse I love it!
     
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    I tried to make it simple, although it does look alittle messy.
     
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    Amazing. Thats truly amazing.
     
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    It's meany yo be colorful as the game it self IS colorful.


    It's messy, and the borders don't work out. The text as well, it looks too plain. Try to get a fancy one - but not too fancy.
     
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    Its good

    the borders are too fat
     
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    It looks good, Is the wolf shooting flames from his mouth? xD
     
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    I'm assuming Amaterasu is the focal point of the image right?

    You might want to do something to make Ammy stick out a bit more.

    Heres an interesting idea, since the whole game is based on the idea that the world is a place Amaterasu has painted into existence, what about having only Amaterasu in full color, then have the color gradually fade as it goes to the right until you get to the far right where everything is still only line art.

    That kind of gives the idea that the color is flowing from Amataerasu into the rest of the world. Its just an idea, it may or may not look good once you try it, but its worth a try I think.

    Also the color pallets on the different images you've used all seem different, some with more bright and others with more dulled colors. You might want to do some color correction to everything blends together with more of a sense of harmony.

    I would also make the black border go down the sides. You might also consider instead of clean lines for the border using the same oil painting style of line to hold in the image (again just an idea to try).

    I'm not crazy about the font choice, text size or placement, I would plan with that a bit more.

    All in all I like it, and I LOVED Okami as a game, it was a ton of fun and very beautiful.
     
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    There were some great ideas in there, thanks! I'll try those ideas for next
    time.
     
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    you didn't really do much just take pictures and add them together and put your name on it.
     
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    I think the border on the sides r too thick
     
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