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Sharingan Obito Returns!

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by chishio-kun, Oct 7, 2006.

  1. chishio-kun likes strawberries.

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    Please read my fanfic:

    Constructive criticism is very welcome. I hadnt finished the first chapter yet, but I hope you guys like it :p

    PS, the prologue is fairly short, but I will promise you guys chapter one soon.
     
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  3. Hideaki I want a sandwich

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    Pretty cool. I give it an 8.
     
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    Gee, thanx. For that, I will post chapter one as soon as possible!
     
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    Great!More!More!I give it a 10 out of 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. Hideaki I want a sandwich

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    Your welcome. I bet chapter 1 is gonna be even cooler.
    So does obito know he is missing an eye?
     
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    No, and he will eventually. He can still see, but his vision is weak
     
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    Uh wait a sec, if one of Obito's eyes is in Kakashi's socket and the other has been crushed by a rock, how is he seeing?
     
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    That will be revealed later, how that "rock ninja" killed him and how it actually happened.
     
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    oh alright thanks
     
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    good work, I give it a 7
     
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    Ok, Obito has only one Sharingan eye right now, (it is because Kakashi has the other) and in total he has one eye. Kakashi has a total of two eyes, but one of it is Obito's. That is how my story emerges.
     
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    There, I posted chapter one. Comments please
     
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    I demand more. Nice start by the way. I've never come across an Obito-fic like this so it's interesting to read.
     
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    Thank you. I will have a delay in writing though, since I have to develop a mixed style that will greatly improve my writing (see Jikken 1: Sasuke)
     
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    I'm sorry for the delay. I am a student that has to jumble school and leisure to fit my time, but I always find myself losing leisure away. I am almost finished doing chapter 2, and I have also changed some mistakes in chapter 1.
     
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    I have posted the third chapter, I wish you enjoy it... if not... too bad.
     
  18. dummy plug ♥Jiyeon Boing Boing♥

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    nice...keep on comin!
     
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