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Shina, my own creation

Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by Akakyubi, Dec 3, 2005.

  1. Akakyubi

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    hey all, I made a drawing of a character for a fanfic I'm working on, and I wanted to let you guys see it:smile-big



    the colouring wasn't too precise, I know, but I just get so easily bored:sweatdrop
    please tell me what is good, and what isn't:)
     
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    big picture :tem! anyway the coloring looks good, but it looks like you didn't shade the left side of her hair. other then that nice :amuse
     
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    the face looks pretty squished together.
     
  4. Akakyubi

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    I see what you mean, altough I guess it's because of the hair and the big eyes. I think that's a pretty normal shape.
    and as the wary eye may have noticed, I added highlights to the left part of the hair, thanks nt90 for reminding:amuse
     
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    overall..it looks pretty ok


    Next time: Try to draw with thinner lines. Also her eyes should be symetrical (sp?) and a bit lower. Oh..and her neck is a bit to big...she's a girl! (ur trying to draw manga right?)
     
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