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Terrorist Fighter

Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by DeepCut, May 28, 2007.

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    Direct sketchbook scan, fixed the contrast tho.
    (hate scanning and finding out the drawing looks totally different on screen than on paper!)

    Second link if first runs out of bandwitdth:
    [Kuro-Hana]Kenichi-23

    So, what do you guys think?
     
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    wow that's a pretty good sketch u got there
     
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    Lol dude, terrorist fighter? That dudes equipment seems a little in-humane.
    Nice shading, and design though.

    For critiques:
    His anatomy is....jumbled. More or less looks like you guessed on how they connected rather than looking at a model (which helps alots)
    His stance isn't stable, as in it looks as if he's standing on his tip toes.
     
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    A very detailed sketch DeepCut, he doesn't look like a terrorist thou, he looks lika mutant instead XD, but still very creative drawing, keep up the good work.
     
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    His body parts are not in good proportion.
     
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    Thanks for the comments!

    For some reason it seemed right to me when drawing it, now that I actually look at it, it does seem a bit awkward XD.

    Guess I focused more on the details then on anatomy/perspective.

    I'll have to watch out for that.
     
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    That pretty good thar. :)

    On the anatomy, if you wanna get technical, some parts are very good, but then others don't seem as sharp and proportionate. Over all it's pretty good though.
     
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