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The adventure of Naruto.

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by kapsi, Sep 27, 2006.

  1. kapsi

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    Spoiler: rated X
    Chapter 1: Love in the air.

    "Nooo" screamed Naruto and Akatsuki Leader raped Sakura's lifeless body.
    "Wait for your turn son." said yondaime.
    "She was in 9th month you bastard!"

    10 months earlier.

    "Ughhhh" - Naruto was struggling to complete his new jutsu.
    "Hello Naruto" said Kakashi and whipped out his cock.
    "What the fuck?"
    "Ooh Naruto I want you to touch me"
    "No way in hell you freak. But I see you finally snapped!"
    "It's just...I read this chapter in Icha Icha...where Jirayia san describes that trip to hot springs with you..."
    "What? He was supposed not to tell anyone! Fuck, now I have to kill you Kakashi sensei."
    "I don't think so. Yamato!"

    Suddenly the tree behind Naruto started growing additional branches. Soon Naruto was trapped. He felt a hand on his ass.
    "Let go of me bastards!"
    "Sorry Naruto, no can do. Think of it as payment for your training."
    "Well said Yamato." - said Kakashi - "thanks for helping me, you can rape him first."
    "Thanks Kakashi san! Too bad he's not a rear virgin. And you know Jirayia sama has a big one!"
    Both men laughed as Naruto screamed for help. He was soon silenced though.

    Meanwhile...
    "WHAT THE FUCK?!" said Hinata. Before her eyes Kiba was humping his dog from behind while Shino kissed him passionately.
    "You started without me?!"

    Meanwhile...
    When he waked up this morning, Sai never thought he'd be tied, hanging upside down with his biggest paintbrush up his ass just a few hours later.
    "I hope you're ready for this cause I fucking am!" Said Ino, putting on biggest motherfucking strap-on he ever saw.

    Meanwhile...
    "Are you ready? Are you ready for my spirit of youth you bitch?!" yelled Gai, furiously masturbating with one hand and repeatedly slapping Rock Lee's face with the other.
    "Yes sensei! Please, give it to me! Now! Ahhh!" screamed Lee in ecstasy as streams of his sensei's hot white love covered his face.
    "You're a genius of hard work Lee!"

    The day went on...
     
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  2. What The

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    WHAT THE? :amazed
     
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    I hope you didn't think of this fanfic Kapsi, but then again... it wouldn't surprise me.
     
  4. CrazyMoronX

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    I would say that's more... X-Rated, or at least NC-17.

    You never explain how Sakura was pregnant, I'm disappointed in that regard.

    Other than the fact you made everyone gay (which is just.. well, gay), it was an excellent story.

    I give you 2 big Jiraiya penises up.
     
  5. kapsi

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    OMG WTF
    Im sorry but HinaxShinoxKibaxAkamaru? I think your missing Kurenai.
     
  7. Jenna Berry

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    Well...

    First put in a NC-17 warning somewhere before the mod landfills this one.

    Secondly, the whole thing seemed to rush a lot. I don't know what you were planning but for a serious fanfic I'd burn this one down for poor overall writing skill.

    I'd give some points for originality in the last part. I don't think anyone has done an orgy lemon with Kunerai team.
     
  9. Vance

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    You are a god damn genius11!!!
     
  10. Vance

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    But add more detail. Why are all the scenes quickies?
     
  11. Shogun

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    damn, this is the closest i have seen to a story that can rival the C Force.
     
  12. Vance

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    Add more!!!! ! Make it dirtier!
     
  13. MiNaC

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    What the hell is this? :omg
     
  14. Vance

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    It is the work of a genius.
     
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    I was searching the past month for this fic! I found it!
     
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    that was some messed up $HIT!!!!!! how can you think of this?????
     
  17. Vance

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    I hope kapsi gets unbanned, he's awesome.
     
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    this is beyond bondage its just messed up
     
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