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The dance

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Hiroshi Jiro, Oct 2, 2006.

  1. Hiroshi Jiro

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    Me: I'm not going to say it unless you sing Kiba
    Kiba: No! NEVER!
    Hinata and Naruto: Dude do it he's the writer!
    Lee: What they said!
    Neji: umm...yeah.
    Kiba: Your point.
    Me: I can do anything to you! *evil grin*
    Kiba: Uhhh....fine.....*sings does your chain hang low.*
    Me: Okay!
    Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto if I did this would happen!

    Chapter 1: Naruto's plan

    blahblahblah : Change in scene
    blahblahblahbalh: Demon
    blahblahblah: Flash back
    blallalala: Regular stuff

    Naruto, Neji, Kiba, and Lee were walking to the Ramen shop when Naruto shouted, "Guys, I just had the best idea!" "Well, let's here it!" shouted Kiba!
    "Okay you know how the dance is coming up?!" Naruto said. "Yeah." they all replied. "Well I have an idea, we just need 5 gallons of vingar, 5 pounds of sugar, 2 bags of feathers, and 50 pounds of glue!" "Well I can get everything but the 50 pounds of glue." replied Neji. Everyone looked shocked. "R..really?" asked Naruto. "Don't ask." replied Neji. "Okay now all we need is the glue." "I CAN GET IT!" yelled Lee, "how do you think my weights stay on." "Well now where set!" yelled Naruto. Quickly he told them the plan and left.

    To Naruto's house

    When Naruto got home he quickly fell asleep. "Hello brat." Huh what..oh no not you" Naruto replied. " Yes me now.... Kyubbi reaches over and chokes Naruto. " WHAT ARE YOU THINKING" "AHHH STOP!"
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    Will post more as 1. I get positve rep for it and/or 2. I come up with more.
     
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    yo i like your fanfic keep it up :laugh
     
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    naruto and hinata better get together........im a huge naru/hina fan...
     
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    my b-day October 30!yay me i'll be 12 !!!!
     
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    Please, that's spam. Happy birthday.

    I like this fic it's funny!!! In a weird way. Please continue.
     
  7. Hiroshi Jiro

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    Thx guys...I will...and yes the pairings are Naruto/Hinata Rocklee/Sakura
    Kiba/Ino?? (just cause :p so get over it) Neji/Tenten
     
  8. Hiroshi Jiro

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    Me: I'm not going to say it unless you sing Kiba
    Kiba: No! NEVER!
    Hinata and Naruto: Dude do it he's the writer!
    Lee: What they said!
    Neji: umm...yeah.
    Kiba: Your point.
    Me: I can do anything to you! *evil grin*
    Kiba: Uhhh....fine.....*sings does your chain hang low.*
    Me: Okay!
    Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto if I did this would happen!

    Chapter 1: Naruto's plan

    blahblahblah : Change in scene
    blahblahblahbalh: Demon
    blahblahblah: Flash back
    blallalala: Regular stuff

    Naruto, Neji, Kiba, and Lee were walking to the Ramen shop when Naruto shouted, "Guys, I just had the best idea!" "Well, let's here it!" shouted Kiba!
    "Okay you know how the dance is coming up?!" Naruto said. "Yeah." they all replied. "Well I have an idea, we just need 5 gallons of vingar, 5 pounds of sugar, 2 bags of feathers, and 50 pounds of glue!" "Well I can get everything but the 50 pounds of glue." replied Neji. Everyone looked shocked. "R..really?" asked Naruto. "Don't ask." replied Neji. "Okay now all we need is the glue." "I CAN GET IT!" yelled Lee, "how do you think my weights stay on." "Well now where set!" yelled Naruto. Quickly he told them the plan and left.

    To Naruto's house

    When Naruto got home he quickly fell asleep. "Hello brat." Huh what..oh no not you" Naruto replied. " Yes me now..." Kyubbi reaches over and chokes Naruto. " WHAT ARE YOU THINKING" "AHHH STOP!" Suddenly Naruto wakes up. He gripes his neck in fear. "Gezz...crazy fox!" Then Naruto just rembered. 'The Plan!'
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    "Ok Neji so you can get everything but the glue?" Naruto asked. "Yes." Neji replied. "Now Lee we need te glue too." "Right I'll get it!" Lee shouted. "SHHH!" they all shushed. "Ohh...sorry." he apologized. "Ok now we all know the plan so get some sleep and be ready tommorow!" Naruto said.
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    Naruto quickly got up and got dressed. ' I better hurry!" he thought.
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    This is all I got
     
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    If you don't like it then leave.....
     
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    its good i gues.....
     
  12. Hiroshi Jiro

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    Whats with the "blahblahblah"?

    I would read it if it was in a novel format. Doesn't seem interesting with just the dialouge.
     
  14. Hiroshi Jiro

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    Well it's supposed to be for fanfiction.com
     
  15. Hiroshi Jiro

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    "Dude what the fuck?" Everyone asked as they saw Neji with everything but the glue. "Why the hell-" "Honestly I said don't ask!" Neji snarled with a evil glare.


    "What ever." Naruto said

    [bwahaha post form. I'll update it like this all the time]
     
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    um.....it's ok i guess.... not trying to be mean or anything....but it's too short for each post, lacks details and........ the writing itself is noobish ....... the plot is interesting though, but you could work on the writing and i think it would be good
     
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