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The Invasion Comes and Love of Kohona may Crumble!

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Chidoriblade, Oct 9, 2006.

  1. Chidoriblade

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    OK here is my fanfic. PLease post about if oyu liked it or notsmile-big


    Chapter 1: We all fall for someone.
    Naruto's part!
    This village is my home. My life. I became a ninja to make friends but mostly to protect those I love even if those i love do not love me back. The Fourth gave his life for the village. And so did the Third. Now its been months since we meet Sasuke in Orichmaru's hidden base. And training is hard but there is another thing that is harder. But now its time to return home.

    Sakura's part!
    "I havn't seen Naruto or Kakashi in weeks," I sighed. Ino sighed too.
    "No ones around anymore. All on missions or out training. Only you, me, and Hinata."
    We slowly walked around the village so empty and quiet. Finaaly hunger bested us and we went out for some ramen. And there we saw Hinata all aone. SHe jumped as we sat down besides her.

    HInata's Part!

    "Oh Sakura, Ino! WHy ar-ar-are you here?" I asked.
    "We're hungry," Sakura said plainly but she sounded sad.
    Minutes later we all were eating ramen in complete silence when someone ploped down next to me. I looked up and froze.
    "One ramen please."
    "Only one?"
    "Yeah," Naruto sighed. He looked next to him and seeing the three of us staring at him he froze.
    "Uh hi," we all said.

    Next Time: He returns!
     
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  2. WarmasterCain55

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    A good piece of work. Good job.
     
  3. Chidoriblade

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    Thank you I would write another right now but my eyes are out off foocuse cause I have been reading other fics for an hour.

    Aw what the hell Ill try and get it done!
     
  4. Chidoriblade

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    ANd here it is!
    Chapter 2: He Returns


    NAruto's Part!
    "Um! Oh crap guess I got caught," I laughed shakily.
    Sakura walked up to me and looked over me. SHe checked my pulse and the burn marks on my hands. "What kind of training are you doing?"
    "Uh secret!"
    "Here's your ramen."
    "Thanks," I said and scarfed the ramen down and ran! Sakura and Ino charged after me. Even Hinata!
    "Come back here and tell us what happened to you!" Ino shouted!

    Sakura's Part!
    Naruto was faster than I thought and quickly out ran us. But with Hinata we soon found him! I punched the wall where he was to tell him we found him.


    Ino's Part! Comnig soon
     
  5. InoSakuShine

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    Good job keep it up.
     
  6. Chidoriblade

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    Sorry cant make anymore today ill try tommorow!
     
  7. Tanaka Ichiro

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    Instead of putting "Hinatas part" u could put :Hinata

    or not, not really my decision
     
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