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The Raging Wolves

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LinkG07, Sep 18, 2005.

  1. LinkG07

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    Link here, I got a couple of characters of my own. These three I made a long time ago. Here goes:

    Name: Haru Ichiree
    Age: 16
    Hair: Green
    Outfit: Dark green open top, with black shirt under. Black sash and green pants. Trational ninja shoes. His Leaf headband is around his neck.
    Ninjitsu: Animal shape-shifting.
    Abilities: Talk to animals...
    Likes: Making friends, animals
    Dislikes: Villians, animal haters...

    Data: Like Naruto, Haru grew up without a mother. His father was abussive towards him and drank his troubles away with the death of his wife. Even though he grew up being abused, he always kept a possitive attitude. He now joins the school to make lots of friends, both man and animal. He also has a pet girl monkey Jeejee.

    Name: Nanina
    Age: 15
    Hair: Purple
    Outfit: Violet topless blouse, (from top of chest, up.) white sash, pink skirt, and traditional ninja shoes, and the Leaf Headband wrapped around her middle finger.
    Ninjitsu: Amplifies any part of her body, healing...
    Abilities: None
    Likes: Hugs, Haru...
    Dislikes: Mean people, her size...

    Data: Born of ogre demon blood, Nanina has alittle trouble, "fitting in." Nanina current size is, 24'6 and growing! Even though she a decendent of a clan of blood thirsty orges, Nanina is very sweet and really pretty. She joins the ninja school to try and fit in and learn to defend herself, that is if she can fit through the door. She dislikes her size, but finds out that some people like her just the way she is...

    Name: Jinnho Hikaito (Jin)
    Age: 16
    Hair: Red
    Outfit: Red open top, with white stripes, white shirt under, red shorts, white sash, traditional ninja shoes, and the Leaf Headband around his forehead.
    Ninjitsu: The manipulation and control of fire.
    Abilities: None
    Likes: Burning things, fighting.
    Dislikes: Water...

    Data: Jinnho is a guy who would rather die than get help from anyone else. Jinnho grew up as a fire starter and grew fond of it as he burned more and more things. He weilds it as his jutsu and wants to know everything there is to know about the element. Jinnho is a loner who only is interested in his own needs. He has no intentions of making friends or allies, that is until he met is greatest rival, Haru.
     
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  2. DaRevengeMaestro

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    Alright, what you would want to do is alter them a little bit. Do some reading on FF.Net, not .com, and look up stories like Dichotomy of Namikaze Naruto and Will of the Warrior. An OC scare has occured, where people are scared to have OC's as compliments to the main character in any way. Why? I won't read something like, 'Naruto meets so-so at so-so and they train to get stronger' or 'Itachi missed another Uchiha'. Those have been done too many times. Also, OC centric stories tend not to go too far, as people want to see mainline characters, and not scant views of them.

    This is why 'Next Generation' fics went out the window.
     
  3. TunaFish inactive

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    Make sure you have a good plot.
     
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