Well, after a lack of constructive advice from FFN on improving my writing technique, I thought I'd try here. I'm really hoping for suggestions on my strengths and weaknesses as a writer, and what improvements I could make. Here's a link (It's a WIP, so it's not complete yet) It's a fic on/about Sasuke. Kinda. I just spotted a lot of fics that had AU where Sasuke didn't try to join the sound. I wanted to write a fic that might explain how that would happen. It's a butterfly effect type fic. A tiny change leading to a bigger eventual change. Should be almost totally IC, I think. I hate OOC fics.