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This Temari sucks!

Discussion in 'Art Lounge' started by Blue, Nov 4, 2005.

  1. Blue Well-Known Member Supporting Staff Retired Staff

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    You've been warned; usually when I post art, I'm looking for people to sing my praises and tell me I'm awesome. (Hey, I'm human, too)

    But I know full well that this Temari isn't that great - so criticism, perhaps?

    By the way, I know her legs are out of proportion - they're meant to be Barbie-esque. Hopefully that's obvious. But if they're out of proportion with themselves, that would be nice to know. ^^

     
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    the body looksn nice :amuse her bumbum looks sweet :)
    and the head is oke too only the eyes and the nose are taking to much facial space :)
    and saying it deserves you a rep my friend :amuse
    i like it good job
     
  3. BlackBeret L337

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    Maybe change the angle of the head and make the shoulders more rounder...
     
  4. Gator I was broken

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    there is something wrong with her face....but that might be your style of drawing..other then that i cannot seem to find real flaws..you colour beautifully
     
  5. forsak3n Sexy beast

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    Looks very nice, first off. However, her face is unproportional, and she lacks ears. I don't know why her skirt is half way up enough to show a part of her ass lol (like how you did the skin :p)

    if you could just fix the face(the ears and eyes, the forehead looks way too slanty IMO, should be round like "("), it would make one wicked picture :p

    edit: oh yea and the pointy soulders too

    damn, the legs look very nice :p
     
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    i like how u shaped the legs just the face and profile needs work other than that great job:amuse
     
  7. OniTasku [Weeabro for life]

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    I looks actually pretty good. The form is pretty nice, I like the pose in which she is in. Though, her face is what really bothers me, the nose seems a bit too long and the angle of the face seems slightly odd.

    Again, the pose is great, and I love how you intetionally made the legs unproportional. Great job, Knk! :amuse
     
  8. batanga 6 1 15-45 300

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    Mouth, jawline and forehead are a bit off.
    Also, the foreheadprotector is too tightly around her neck.
    Too wide shoulders, too.

    But the lower half is just excellent, 'specially the legs and the fan :thumbs
     
  9. Blue Well-Known Member Supporting Staff Retired Staff

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    Why can't I see anything wrong with her nose? T_T

    ...maybe because I drew it. -_-
     
  10. Jef88 88

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    prolly the hardest think is to look for youre own mistakes but its pretty good :amuse
    the angle it has to be turned more away
     
  11. Kool ka lang -----------

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    Nice colouring and hair, though the face might be okay for other manga, but not for temari.
     
  12. ez Jesus Christ

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    I saw the face and I couldn't look any more :omg Her nose is as big as Pinocchio's :laugh
     
  13. Low-fi Boy Head in the clouds

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    It's the face and the lack of ears, and maybe the angular shoulders too, unless you wanted it like that: but everything else is fantastic
     
  14. Shishou Under this eyepatch is an eye!

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    That pic gave me a hard on.

    Good job!
     
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    her nose seems too pointed, but everthing else :thumbs
     
  16. Feathers! Jiraiya

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    Temari... barbie legs are a nice touch and it is colored well. thumbs up.
     
  17. nt90 Artist in training

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    I think the shoulders are a bit to pointy other than that looks good :amuse
     
  18. Blue Well-Known Member Supporting Staff Retired Staff

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    Refresh it.

    Any better now? =_=
     
  19. Shishou Under this eyepatch is an eye!

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    I love miniskirts so much >.<
     
  20. Kineas Standing alone.

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    If you're drawing it as a random person dressing up in Temari's style, it'll be a pretty fine piece of art.

    If it's meant to be Temari, something's still not right about the facial structure. Generally too sharp, I suppose?

    The ear needs to be shifted.. to the left? Not sure on this.

    I think I do know what's wrong with the nose. It's too sharp. Considering that this is a side view, that nose would look like a sharp, pointed beak when viewed from the front.
     
  21. poopyfish Fear the Fish

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    everything else is drawn in a 3d manner, accept the face... Its to flat.
    her nose is still off a bit, and her forehead is to flat... also....

    maybe her right shoulder should be rounder... the left is fine.

    other than that, i love it...
    <3 Temari <3
     
  22. Chamcham Trigger 光翼型近接支援残酷戦闘機“エヴァッカニア・ドゥーム

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    People are always their own greatest critics (unless of the conceited type :amuse). I liked it. The face seemed to be a little thin for temari, but other than that, it's really good.
     
  23. Xenophobia Brillent...but Lazy..very Lazy

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    Temari needs a nice butt
     
  24. NarutardKK l'Cie

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    Nah, I like it! especially the coloring :p
     
  25. Kaki Condensed hits harder

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    Keep up the good work, however I did not at all enjoy seeing it.
     
  26. [TK]Hinata Too shy for a custom title.

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    Not too bad KnK. The legs and the body are looking pretty good, the fan has good placement too, the hair was good, but the only thing that needs a little improvement is her face. Dunno why, it just looks funny. :p
     
  27. pinay_pride123 I dont know.I'm just like that

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    Its very nice,and kinda interesting...!
     
  28. XxX_izzie_XxX Hanginanino

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    just her shoulders otherwise this is great
     
  29. Lucifer Banned

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    very nice colors, face looks okay! that's hard a bit!!! good work!! I love it ~.~ she is damn hottest.
     
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