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Twice Shy continuation (Desires and Intentions)

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by naruhina26, Oct 10, 2006.

  1. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    I didn`t like my first and second thread so i`m redoing it ok?? first of all you will only understand the story if you have read

    TWO HALVES
    and
    TWICE SHY


    Twice Shy was dropped by the author so I decided to continue it`s story with my own version so before antone bashes me I tried contacting Damewren but had no luck

    Naruto is owned by Kishimoto

    Twohalves and Twiceshy owned by Damewren

    Please don`t spam my thread it is only for reviews and remarks thanks
     
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  2. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    here`s chapter 4
    Spoiler:

    Desires and Intentions (Twice Shy)

    Chapter 4

    After the warm but tensioned filled reunion of old friends, those who were left went out to eat lunch.

    Shino and Kiba were leading the way followed by Naruto and Hinata, completing them were Ino and Sakura talking behind them.

    Naruto is such a hunk Ino whispered to Sakura.

    I tell you you forehead girl, If I had known that Naruto would turn out to be such a hunk, I would have stop liking Sasuke and have started to get close to Naruto ever since the academy Ino started to say to Sakura.

    Come on Ino, we both know how much of a idiot Naruto was back then answered Sakura.

    Yeah I guess your right, but you know If those two didn`t make such a cute couple , I would have already step in between them and keep Naruto all to myself Ino confidently said.

    All the while Sakura was looking at the couple in front of them. Hinata was grabbing Naruto`s arm while her head was resting on his shoulder. Sakura just looked down on the ground, she looked almost disappointed.

    Neh, Sakura chan? Naruto said looking at the two girls behind them.

    Yes, Naruto? Sakura answered back.

    Can you tell me were Sasuke is?

    Didn`t you know Shino asked Naruto.

    Know what?

    Sasuke and Shikamaru are now jounins

    NANI!?

    Oh yeah we forgot to tell you, both of them passed the jounin exams last year together with Neji, Lee, and Tenten. Ino explained.

    The five of them make up team 4 that passed the jounin exams, everybody was so impressed with their performance during the exam, but personally I could have done much better If they have picked me to take the exam. Kiba proudly exclaimed.

    Yeah right Kiba, If you were there, you probably would have not made it past the first round Ino mockingly answered.

    Everybody started laughing again.

    Sasuke-kun and Kakashi-sensei are currently on a mission, didn`t Hokage-sama told you asked Sakura.

    Naruto`s smile suddenly disappeared upon hearing Kakashi`s name. He then remembers the stories Sora told them about Kakashi knowing about everything.

    Hinata bit her lip and sadly looked at Naruto.

    Don`t worry Hina-chan Naruto said, while smiling at Hinata.

    I`m sure I will have time to talk to Kakashi-sensai about everything he said in western.

    Hinata similing back at Naruto tighten her grip in his arm, nodded and answered Hai

    Their four companions were again in confused in their inability to understand the conversation of the two.

    Kiba who was obviously getting irritated finally burst`s out saying I can`t believe this, you two were together on a class A mission for three years, suddenly you come back a couple and talk to each other in a language that only the two of you know, and.

    Shino cut him off saying Kiba, stop being so jealous and be quiet
    Kiba who was oviously embarrassed shouted J-E-A-L-O-U-S, me why would I even be huh?

    Do you really want me to answer that Kiba? Besides were here.

    WOW, is this really Ichirahu ramen shop? Naruto was obviously surprised

    They were standing at the entrance of an average restaurant but it was big enough to at least occupy a big enough crowd.

    What we waiting for, let`s go in, come on Hina-chan. Naruto grabbing Hinata hand and going inside as the others followed behind them.

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    Hey mister, Ayame. How are you? Naruto shouted inside the restaurant

    Oh, Naruto it`s been a long time since I last saw you. A voice said

    Ayame how are you, and How is the old man

    I`m still fine Naruto, so where did my number one customer went to this past three years? asked shop owner

    We`ve been training, right Hina-chan? Naruto looking back at Hinata.

    Hinata blushed and just nodded.

    Anyway were here to eat lunch mister. Naruto said with his usual grin.

    Can you wait a few minutes Naruto, there was a party here last night and we haven`t had the chance to clean up yet Ayame explained.

    Don`t worry we`ll take care of it right Hina-chan? Naruto proudly said

    So how are you going to clean this place up Naruto? Kiba asked to Naruto.

    Just watch us Naruto was grinning at them.

    Ready Hina-chan

    Hai Naruto-kun

    The two of them perform a couple of hand seals and said Advance Clean Floor no jutsu placing their hands on the floor.

    The floor of the shop, tables, chairs, aswell as the counters flashed purple for a second and suddenly glowed spotless.

    Everybody except for Kiba was amazed with the jutsu that Naruto and Hinata just performed.

    A jutsu fo cleaning? Kiba started out laughing like that`s going to be of any use in a fight.

    Suddenly Hinata started smiling saying Naruto-kun didn`t you say something very similar when Onee-chan first taught us the jutsu?

    Yeah I remember, She was saying that it was better to use your chakra to clean floors than to kill someone right?

    But it takes a lot of concentration and chakra control for you to eliminate just the dirt and not damage anything else said Shino who was obviously interested.

    We just had lots of practice answered Hinata.

    Anyway since you cleaned the shop and it`s been three years since we last saw each other, your orders are in the house said the owner.

    Really, Arigato mister said the excited Naruto.

    So what will it be?

    One miso ramen and one chicken ramen Hinata said

    And maybe some tea Naruto added.

    Everybody looked surprised. Hinata ordering ramen and Naruto asking for some tea. Were they really the same people?

    Naruto turned around and asked What would you guys want?

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    They all sat on one table, Naruto,Hinata and Ino were on one side While Kiba, Sakura and Shino were on the other.

    Naruto started telling about the kind of training and people they met during the past three years. He also talked about hi sister and how she was the one who were training them. Both he and Hinata have agreed not to tell them about the Kaze and about the Akatsuki.

    Suddenly Shizune walked inside the restaurant.

    There you are said Shizune who was exhausted.

    Tsunade-sama is looking for the two of you saying that you should have been in her office writing those report. She was saying something about Sora definitely influencing Naruto but not expecting that Hinata was going to pick up some of her traits. You two must go to the Hokage`s office right now.

    Naurto stood up and started performing some hand seals and yelled Silence no Jutsu

    Shizune tried talking but no words came out of her mouth.

    Gomenasai Shizune-san, but I dont think we should be writing those reports yet said Naruto with with s grin, Come on Hina-chan
    He grabbed Hinata`s hand and started running towards the door, Arigato mister

    Don`t worry Shizune-san the effects of the jutsu will wear-off in a couple of hours, please dont get angry. Hinata explained.

    And just like that Both Naruto and Hinata were gone.

    Hmmm, another amazing and strange jutsu, it seems that both of them have learned a lot during the past three years. Shino said

    Kiba and Ino just nodded in agreement.

    Sakura just watched as the two rub through the door.

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    Naruto and Hinata were in training grounds and were happily smiling at each other. They were sitting by a tree, Naruto`s hand was on Hinata`s shoulder.

    Ney, Hina-chan

    Hai, Naruto-kun

    ince we want to surprise them at the jounin exams, how are going to practice?
    Hinata started thinking.

    Why don`t we practice here early tomorrow morning, we could practice our sets and a couple of jutsus.

    That`s a great idea Hina-chan, that way we can show everybody how good we have become right

    Hai Hinata answered.

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    Naruto-kun, it`s getting late why don`t we get back now before my father starts looking for me.

    Ok Hina-chan Naruto helping Hinata up and giving her a sweet kiss

    They were walking on the streets about a block away from the hyuuga manor.

    So we will meet at the training grounds at five am right Hina-chan?

    Hinata nodded and with a smile kissed Naruto in the cheeks.

    Naruto started heading home waving at Hinata.

    Hinata just wave back no knowing that Hanabi was at door looking at the two.
     
  3. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    and chapter 5

    Spoiler:
    Desires and Intentions (Twice Shy)

    Chapter 5

    As Hinata walked into the Hyuuga Manor (house), she was startled by a soft and calm voice.

    ?Hinata-chan? said Hanabi.

    ?Oh, Hanabi-chan,? answered Hinata back who was obviously shock upon seeing her sister, ?Were you waiting for me?

    Hanabi just nodded in agreement saying ?Ano, it`s been three years since you were sent in that mission, I was hoping we could spend more time together, although it seems that you are always with Naurto-san?

    A surprised look came over Hinata who was thinking what to say to her little sister.

    ?Ever since you left?? continued Hanabi ?Father`s training became more intense, He was saying that I should not be a weakling and I should always strive to become the strongest.?

    A sudden feeling of sadness came to Hinata as she was remembering her conversation with her father in the hospital.

    ?I was very lonely and had no one to talk to, but when you returned I was glad because I know you will always keep me company? said Hanabi.

    ?Gomenasai, Hanabi-chan, this all happened because I was not strong enough? Hinata answered as she hugged her sister.

    A voice suddenly surprised the two sisters.

    ?Hinata, Hanabi, what are you still doing there, dinner will be ready soon so both of you should get ready? exclaimed their father Hiashi.

    ?Hai Otou-san? the girls answred as they went into the house and into their rooms.

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    It was August already, three moths have passed since the two leaf nins who trained for three years returned to their village, It was clear to them that nothing has really change in their beloved village. Except for a few things that would make Naruto go ?WOW? and ?REALLY?, Hinata on the other hand would just smile, she was contented that she was with the man she trusted with her life, the man she loved.

    One morning three kunoichi were eating breakfast in a restaurant when they noticed a young raven haired girl walking down the street looking like she just finished training.

    ?Hey Hinata? Ino shouted at the direction of Hinata.

    ?Hinata saw her fellow kunoichi, she smiled and started to head towards their direction.

    She sat right beside Sakura.

    ?Hey, have you guys heard?? asked a grinning Ino

    ?Heard what?? asked a curious Ten-ten

    ?Well there are rumors spreading that every morning, two people, apparently a boy and a girl is always seen fighting in the training grounds near the waterfalls? whispered Ino.

    Hinata started coughing almost dropping her tea on the table.

    ?Are you alright Hinata-chan?? asked a concerned Sakura

    ?Don`t worry about me, I`m alright? answered Hinata who was trying to hide the fact that she knew what Ino was talking about.

    ?As I was saying?? continued Ino, ?they were not exactly fighting, rather more like sparring as other people would say a strange kind of new taijutsu?
    ?What do you mean a strange type of new taijutsu? asked Ten-ten

    ?It`s exactly what I mean, no one who has seen them could identify the type of taijutsu they were using. It is different than any taijutsu here in Konnoha? said Ino

    Hinata just kept quite and did not try to enter the conversation.

    ?Have you asked Lee-kun or Gai-sensei about it?? asked Sakura

    ?I asked Lee about it, he said that he was mesmerized by how the couple move?? said Ino

    ?Do you mean Lee has actually seen them?? asked Ten-ten

    ?Apparently he has..? Ino continued ?He said that he went there as soon as he heard the rumor, their taijutsu were amazing , unlike anything he have ever seen before,?

    ?Then? asked Sakura

    ?As he went to greet the couple the girl suddenly formed a few hand seals, and poof they were gone.? Said Ino in dismay

    Hinata just started blushing.

    ?Hinata-chan, are you sure you`re alright?? asked Ten-ten

    ?Yeah Hinata-chan, you are red, do you a fever or something?? added Sakura.

    Just then a spiky-haired blonde enters the restaurant.

    ?Ney, Hina-chan? suddenly waving his hand at the raven-colored hair girl.

    Hinata who blushed some more as the people inside the restaurant started looking at them just gave a shy wave at naruto saying ?Hi Naruto-kun?

    ?Neh..? asked Naruto ?can I seat with you beautiful girls??

    ?Sure you can Naruto-kun? answered Ino

    ?Wow Naruto, when did you become such a charmer?? asked Ten-ten

    Naruto just smiled at them with his usual grin

    ?Yeah well it comes to you when you have one of the most beautiful girls in the whole world? Naruto looking to Hinata as he sat beside her

    ?Naruto-kun? as Hinata blushed some more as Ino cuts them off

    ?Hey you two love birds, I`m in a middle of an important gossip here, would you mind saving your being sweet together when alone? said Ino with a slightly evil grin while looking at Naruto and Hinata who were both blushing.

    Sakura on the other hand was just sadly listening

    ?As I was saying, I heard this started to happen about three months ago, the boy was said to have spiky hair while the girl had wavy shoulder length hair? explained Ino.

    Both Naruto and Hinata just froze in their sit.

    ?Hmmm?? Ten-ten thought, ? a guy with spiky hair and a girl with wavy shoulder length hair? I feel like these fit somebody we know?

    ?My thought as well? Ino added ?I just can`t seem to point my finger on it.

    Suddenly, with a loud voice Naruto shouted ?I just remembered? looking at Hinata ?Hina-chan and I were summoned to Obaa-chan`s I mean Hokage`s office?

    ?Let`s go Hina-chan? as Naruto grabbed Hinata`s hand and started to walk to the door

    ?See you guys later? said Naruto as he wave goodbye to the three kunoichi who was still sitting at the table.

    Ten-ten and Ino were deep in thought

    ?A guy with spiky hair? Ino thought

    ?A girl with wavy shoulder length hair? Ten-ten thought

    Both of them suddenly gave out a scream ?AHHHH!?

    They looked at each other and said their Naruto and Hinata.

    But before they noticed it, the couple was already gone.

    All the while Sakura was looking at the couple who just left and can`t do anything but fake a smile?..
     
  4. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    chapter 6

    Spoiler:
    Desires and Intentions

    Chapter 6

    Sakura was in her room, staring at the moon. She was deep in thought, remembering all the things that has happened in the past three years.




    ?A lot has happened in three years? She thought to herself


    Four moths have passed since Naruto and Hinata went on their class A mission, Sasuke was released from the hospital making Sakura happy but for only a moment. She was soon to learn that things were not going to be the same anymore.

    An order was made by Tsunade that team 7 was officially being disbanded, and to add to the shock Sasuke was to immediately train with Kakashi in s secret place, while sakura was to join the undermanned team 8.

    It was not that Sakura didn`t like her new team, Kiba was infact a lot like Naruto, loud and sometimes obnoxious and Shino although quiet and very stoic was very good as a teammate. And when push comes to shove both of them were very dependable. She was also able to learn quite a number of illusion type genjutsu from her new sensei Kurenai.

    She would often see Kurenai looking troubled, and when she asked her new sensei about it she just answered that she was worried about Hinata.

    After a year of being teammates and dozens of missions, they were disbanded after becoming full-pledged chuunins, and once again Sakura was left alone??

    Five months passed, a welcome news was given to Sakura. Both Kakashi and Sasuke have returned. She thought to herself that she will be once again reunited to Sasuke, not knowing the pain she would soon feel.





    She then remembered a dark quite night, a night she would never forget?.


    ?But why Sasuke-kun, why are you saying that you can`t return my love for you and why are you saying that I should not come near you anymore? asked a desperate and crying Sakura

    ?I`m sorry Sakura-chan, the path that I have chosen is the most dangerous path of all, I can`t let people who I have treated as my family get hurt because of me. Answered Sasuke.

    ?But why Sasuke kun?? asked Sakura

    ?I don`t want anyone else getting hurt because of me, this is between me and my brother, again I`m sorry Sakura-chan? said Sasuke as he left the weeping Sakura.





    Tears started to fall down Sakura`s Cheek as she relived what happened that night,



    Soon after both Sasuke and Shikamaru were assigned to Gai`s team to form a five-man jounin candidate team. A genius byakugan user, a taijutsu expert, a long-range combat specialist, an Uchiha with a determination to become stronger, and a lazy shadow-binding battle tactician. With talent in their team it was obvious that they will have no problem passing the exam, no team was able to rival them as they went on their way to become jounins.

    After the exams, team Gai decided to stick together and along with their former sensei, Maito Gai, formed one of the jounin teams in Konnoha. Shikamaru was assigned as a Chuunin examiner and Sasuke was assigned as a partner to Kakashi to carry out some of the most dangerous missions.



    Sakura around only to glance at an old picture frame on her bed, she stood up to get the frame to see it. It was a photo of the original team 7 with their sensei. Her thought was shifted to about a year ago when she was summoned to the Hokage`s office.


    ?I heard you have one of the best chakra control in your batch?? asked Tsunade

    Sakura who was still sad couldn`t even answer the Hokage`s question

    Tsunade rubbed her temples saying ?well I don`t blame you for being angry with me, I mean I sent Naruto away for three years and disbanded your team and the made Sasuke Kakashi`s partner, I know you feel kind of left out so I decided to teach you a few of my jutsus, but of course it won`t be for free.?

    Sakura looked puzzled at Tsunade.

    ?I will only teach you if you agree to do all my paperwork for three months? stated Tsunade

    Quickly three moths have passed, Sakura only learned a few simple medical jutsu because she wanted to learn Tsunade`s technique to demolish and destroy almost anything with her fists.

    She suddenly thought ? I can`t wait to show Naruto what I can do.?

    ?Naruto?? she finally realizes ?Why the hell am I thinking of that idiot?? It was almost as if she missed him.

    After that all she could think about was Naruto, all of his pranks, the way he is always saying he`s going to be Hokage, how he would always try to impress her,? and then it hit her, was she starting to have feelings for the blonde-haired idiot.




    One final thought came to Sakura that night? It was about two months ago?.


    She woke up early that morning not knowing why when she spotted a familiar spiked-hair boy running through the still fogged-filled streets of konnoha?

    ?That was Naruto-kun? she told herself ?Where is he going this early??

    Before she knew it she had the urge the follow the shinobi, She ended up at the training grounds in the north of the village?. The fog was still thick when she saw two silhouettes in the fog. It was Naruto and Hinata, they were sparring with each other with moves Sakura has never seen before. They were so graceful almost as if they were dancing, one knows exactly what the other one was thinking.




    ?Was this the reason they were so close?? ?What actually happened between them these past three years?? ?Why am I this sad whenever I see them together?? This was the questions that circulated in Sakura`s mind as she fell asleep in her bed, tears were running down her cheeks.


     
  5. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    and finally chapter 7 (though some may think it`s too short)


    Spoiler:
    Desires and Intentions

    Chapter 7


    It was quiet night in mid September in Konnoha. The air was cold and chilly. The streets were lit. Atop the balcony of Yodaime`s house sat Naruto and Hinata, they were staring at the sky admiring how beautiful it was with the moon so clear and stars sparkling brightly. They noth seemed so content, so happy that Kurenai just decided not to bother them wnd went straight to her room. They were sitting on a couch in the balcony, Naruto`s arm was over Hinata`s shoulder, while the girl`s head was resting on his chest. Naruto looked at Hinata`s eyes, the stars were reflecting on her eyes, almost sparkling.

    ?Ney Hina-chan? the boy started to speak

    ?What is it Naruto-kun?? asked the raven-haired girl looking at boy she was sitting with

    ?I was wondering, after we kicked everyone`s butt in the jounin exams if you would????

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    Ever since Naruto and Hinata came back from their three year class A mission, It was clear to everyone that they have gotten close together. Every morning they would be training together. But this was only known amongst their friends for the reason that Hinata`s father would not agree that her daughter and future heiress to the Hyuuga clan has a relationship with the Kyuubi`s container. This was the only time of the day that they could be at peace with each other`s company. But all of this was soon to change, if it was for better or for good, no define answers can be given.

    Hinata got home late one afternoon, both she and Naruto was in the Hokage`s office the whole day writing the reports of their training with Sora. Usually, Naruto will have some kind of escape plan ready, but today was different, Tsunade had all the bases covered. There were no chance of them escaping. Much to Naruto`s disnay, they were forced to write the reports.

    Hinata finished early and was dismissed from Tsunade`s office leaving Naruto with Tsunade. The Hokage persuaded the young Hyuuga to leave the blonde-hair boy with her.

    As Hinata was entering the Hyuuga manor, a servant greeted her saying ?Konnichiwa Lady Hinata-san, your father requests you presence in the main hall tonight. There is going to be a meeting of the elders and you are to attend it.?

    A meeting of the elders, Hinata thought to herself. But why was I being requested to attend it.

    As she was approaching her room, she meets up with her cousin in the corridor.

    ?Konnichiwa, Neji-san? Hinata smilingly greeted her cousin. But to her surprise, Neji was deep in his thought. She doubt if he even saw her. But the expression on Neji`s face concerned her. Sadness, anger, doubts, the young genius eyes were filled with different emotions.

    In her room, Hinata cleansed herself, afterwards she put on the traditional kimono she wore for such occasions. While she was combing her hair, she was imagining the sight of Naruto writing the reports and Tsunade smacking him in the head every time he stopped to conplain. She smiled, but was once again distracted when she remembered her cousin`s expression.

    As she was walking through the manor heading towards the main hall, Hinata felt a sense of uneasiness which she could not explain. The only thing she could explain was she felt this every time she remembered Neji`s expression. Upon arriving at the main hall, she announced her arrival and asked permission to come in.

    As Hinata entered the room she saw her father sitting in the center of the room, looking serious as usual she thought. Behind him were the elders of the clan. But what surprised her was that Neji was also there. He was sitting in the room facing her father and the elders.

    ?Hinata, please take a seat beside Neji, we a an important matter to discuss with both of you.? Said one of the elders.

    Hinata bowed her head and went to sit beside her cousin.

    She looked at her cousin, his face was still filled with unexplainable emotions.

    ?Hinata, Neji? started Hiashi ? I will go straight to the point, the elders and I have agreed that Neji`s talents and abilities will be most beneficial for the clan, they will make the clan stronger. So we have decided to start his training to become the new heir to the Hyuuga clan.?

    Hinata was surprise by her father`s announcement. But she was somewhat relieved, the fact that she no longer had to carry the burden of being the heiress to the hyuuga clan. But began to feel uneasy upon seeing Neji, he was more nervous than she have ever seen. He was shaking, his fists were tightly closed.

    ?But? Hinata`s thoughts were stopped when her father began to speak again.

    ?As being born into the branch family, he has no right to become heir to the clan. To uphold our traditions, we have agreed on a compromise as to how to make Neji eligible to become heir.? Hiashi stated.

    Hinata once again looked at her cousin, his fists were trembling, he was biting his lip. But why Hinata thought, Neji-san should be happy to become heir. But why was he acting like this.

    ?So therefore, the only way that Neji can become heir is for him to become part of the main family? Hiashi said

    Finally it was clear, the fact that the she and Neji was requested to attend a meeting for the elders, Neji`s strange actions and behavior, and the uneasiness she felt. Her mind prossesed it in an instant. She did want to hear what her father was going to say next for she already knew what it was going to be.

    ?Hinata, you and Neji are to become husband and wife?


     
  6. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    Its good but the marrige thing is just a little bit wrong.
    you could if you want to have hinata yell no and run out of the room to narutos house.... but thats just my opinin. replay if you think its good or bad
     
  7. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    i was just thinking(i do a little to much of that) that you might have naruto and neji fight for marrige(neji being forced) but its your story you write how you want
     
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    ok awesome twist and i wanna se how naruto's gonna react can't talk now gt tons of hwrk
     
  9. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    well just to say I have already written up to 3 chapters. I just haven`t written them in word yet cause they are still on paper so I can`t post them yet... believe me the next chapter is going to be a shocker or maybe not cause it`s going to be predictable being that I`m a NaruHina fan....

    but just to say Me and my girlfriend just celebrated our 2nd year anniversary last week.. so I can`t help but write some very mushy and uberly romantic hehehe oh and Sora and the others are going to come back soon....

    I decided to postpone the battle I have planned to save them up for the Jounin and Akatsuki battles please enjoy
     
  10. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    ok here`s chapter 8 (It`s kind of confusing but I think it`s a great addition)

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    Desires and Intentions

    Chapter 8


    Husband and wife.

    These words echoed in Hinata`s mind, she was angry, she was shocked, she felt like the world came crashing down on her. She did not know what to do until her father spoke again.

    ?Your wedding will be good for the clan. Our blood line limit shall be preserved and pure. Both of you were summoned here to talk about the plans for the wedding. We have agreed that the ceremony will be held at?..? But before Hiashi could finish, he was interrupted a loud voice.

    ?No! Otou-san? Hinata loudly saying, she stood up some tears can be seen her eyes.

    ?Hinata, what are you saying?? Hiashi slightly raising his voice.

    Hinata who obviously was still scared of her father spoke in a voice no one has ever heard before. She was full of courage upon saying that

    ?I will not marry Neji-san just for the good of the clan.?

    Everyone in the room was shock, was this really Hyuuga Hinata, the girl with no self-confidence. But now look at her, standing up to her own father in front of the elders of the Hyuuga clan.

    ?Hinata!? Hiashi standing up shouting ?Are you disobeying my decisions!??

    Hiashi`s voice was loud almost commanding, it could be heard across the room aswell as outside in the corridors. His voice was enough to wake up Hanabi from her sleep.

    ?Hiashi, calm down? instructed by one of the elders

    ?Yes Hiashi, let us first hear the child`s reason for not accepting the proposal? added another of the elders.

    Hiashi who was still filled with anger said ?Very well?

    Hiashi went back to sitting.

    ?Now child? said the second elder looking at the young Hyuuga ?Why do you not accept the proposal of marriage to your cousin??

    Everyone in room looked at Hinata, all the while Neji was shocked upon seeing her cousins new found courage and against her own father of all people, the person who always put her down.

    ?Otou-san, because..? Hinata pausing for a moment trying to keep her composure until finally saying ?because I love someone else!?

    Hiashi`s eyebrows rose upon hearing her daughter`s answer

    ?Are you telling us the you are willing to sacrifice the future of clan all for this person?? asked the third elder

    Hinata slightly hesitating but soundly said ?Hai?

    Her eyes were filled with courage and bravery, Neji thought to himself that since when did Hinata able to achieve this much confidence in herself, it was almost as if she was acting like Uzuma?..

    Finally the young genius understood. And ended up asking himself ?Has he influenced Hinata-san this much that she was willing to oppose her father, her lineage, her destiny?

    ?And who is this boy?? Hiashi asking his daughter once again his voice was filled with more anger.

    All the while the young Hanabi was outside the main hall listening to the conversation.

    ?I love Naruto-kun? said Hinata

    ?The demon boy? exclaimed one of the elders

    ?Please don`t call him a demon? Hinata saying in a loud voice

    ?Wasn`t it enough it enough that Yodaime-sama and Nanashi-san sacrificed their own lives to seal the Kyuubi into their new born baby not knowing that their child would be mistreated by the same village they died saving!?

    Everyone in the room froze, they were all stunned upon Hinata`s revelations. All of the elders as well as Hiashi knew exactly what Hinata was talking about but it took a few more moments for Neji to analyze what his cousin just said.

    ?Yodaime`s son?? thought Neji ?is she talking about Uzumaki-san? he was finally broken off his thoughts when he heard his cousin speaking again

    ?Otou-san? Hinata speaking calmly but still composed ?Some of the things that I learned during the three years that I trained was to make decisions for myself and not letting other people influence them, and how to judge other people. But if our traditions clouds your judgments about other people, I don`t want to be part of this clan anymore.?

    ?Hinata-san? Neji said while looking at Hinata

    It was clear that Hinata was crying, but the determination on her face prevents it from showing especially when she said ?I don`t want to be a Hyuuga anymore!?

    Hanabi could not believe what her sister just said.

    The elders were also shocked upon hearing Hinata`s decision.

    ?Hinata!? Hiashi standing up and shouted ?Are you going to leave our clan for that demon??

    ?Naruto-kun is not a demon? Hinata shouting back at her father ?He has shown more compassion and respect for me than anyone else ever had? Hinata was already crying but still stood firm.

    ?Hiashi?? said the last of the elders ?it seems that she had made her decision.?

    Hiashi looking at the elders said ?But..?

    ?Hinata..? said the elder ?You very well know the consequences of your actions??

    Hinata looked down for a moment before raising her voice saying ?Hai?

    Upon hearing the girls answer, the elder stood up and said ?All of you here are now witnesses, Hinata as of now is no longer a Hyuuga, from this point own Hyuuga Hanabi will be the heiress to the Hyuuga clan.?
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    It was already late about between ten and eleven pm. Hinata was in her room packing, she decided to leave all the things the was given to her in the clan.All she packed was some personal things and all the things she got from her three year trip with Naruto and Sora. As she was packing she heard a knock on her door, it was Neji and Hanabi.

    ?Hinata-chan? Hanabi rushing to her sister hugging her

    ?Hanabi-chan? said Hinata

    ?Please don`t leave Hinata-chan, maybe if you apologize to otou-san he would reconsider and?.? Hanabi was cut offed bt her sister

    ?Hanabi-chan, this is something I decided to do please understand? Hinata explained to her sister

    Neji came closer to the siblings who were both crying saying ?Hinata-san, where are you planning to go??
    Hinata whipped her tears and said ?I`m planning on staying with Naruto-kun for the moment?

    ?I understand, I would like to help you carry your bags if you don`t mind since it`s already late.? Neji offered

    Hinata said her goodbyes to her sister and together with Neji went to Yodaime`s house. As they were walking through the streets of Konnoha,

    ?Hinata-chan? asked Neji

    Of course Hinata was surprised for it was the first time Neji called her Hinata-chan

    ?Hai, Neji-san?

    ?I envy your strength? said Neji

    ?What do you mean Neji-san, I`m not strong? answered Hinata

    ?You are strong, even stronger than me, because you were able to fight and escape your destiny. This proves how much you`ve grown and how strong you are? explained Neji

    ?Arigato, Neji-san? said Hinata

    ?I just want to ask one thing Hinata-chan, is the source of your courage and strength Uzumaki-san? Neji asked another question

    Hinata just smiled, tears can still be seen in her eyes as she said ?Naruto-kun is more than my strength and courage, he is also my hope and the one I love?

    The two continued to walk towards Yodaime`s house.
     
  11. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    ok may I remind you that the next chapter will be all about love hehehe spoilers
     
  12. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    why did ronin delete al those post (im new)
     
  13. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    your doing a great job with the continuation?? big fan of two halves/twice shy


    um im thinking of writing my own NaruHina story and fuse it with another manga lets just say the main characters inishls? are M.D.L
     
  14. DarkFire immune to modfuck

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    so u guyz dun duble post plz dun and dun advertise ur fanfic in other threads!
     
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    Ive writen two chapters of my own fanfic and I Called it mixed history I'll like to know what you think of it naruhina26 because you are really good and it would mean alot.
    p.s good job with the story loved chapter 8 can't wait for the fights
     
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    dude can u stop advertising ur FF in sum1 else's thread make ur won if u need to!
     
  17. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    ok but this is still a good fanfic i just need opinions
     
  18. DarkFire immune to modfuck

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    then say them in some other section i'm ending this discussion now! Ok when's the next update cause i'm dieing for it!
     
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    yeah im dieing to red the next chapter. big naruhina fan
     
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    me too i'm a really big naruohina pairing look at my sig!
     
  21. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    im gonna sing while i wait singing One is the lonlyest number that i ever knew. TWOOO......
     
  22. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    um.... naruhina26 could you make another thread i think there is something wrong with this one. when i click to go to page 2 it just reloads page one or it rederects me back to page 1. I don't know if your going to respond because to this post is going on page two but i would really love to keep on reading your story. THANK YOU ps it GRREAT!
     
  23. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    never mind fixed it
     
  24. Valesco The Sleepyhead

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    Great continuation so far. I'll be waiting for the next part.

    Cmac: please do not spam this thread
     
  25. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    Uhm sorry bout the late updates guys but my father just left to work overseas again so I haven`t got to time to type them in word jejej sorry bout that be sure to update tomorrow promise
     
  26. naruhina26 Shino-tsu-hiko x Shino-to-be

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    ok for all those who are reading this I`m just going to spoil that I`m going to kill a lot and I mean a LOT of characters....

    Just call me Kill`em - All -Tomino

    oh and all akatsuki members except Itachi and Kisame(dead in two halves) are all my original characters mass updates soon
     
  27. Juggernaut1985 Kubo's Troll

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    As long as important and cool people don't die.

    *please let Sasuke die*
     
  28. Cmac extremly lazy critice

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    lesser characters are ok like hinatas dad or iruka but you might lose fans if you kill the bigger ones like to say Kakashi threw Shino. what im saying is dont kill any of there freind (neji and shikamaru are OK thou kill them)
     
  29. Juggernaut1985 Kubo's Troll

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    Geez, please use proper spelling and grammer Cmac.

    Btw, I am really liking this story.
     
  30. Kamui the Azrael â™ HolyDragonGodâ™ 

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    killing of characters hmm. let me see the path you have chosen
     
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