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What do you think?

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by x-airashii-x, May 29, 2007.

  1. x-airashii-x *Gives you a glacical stare*

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    This is my FIRST ever drawing + colouring of a naruto character, and i know it's not perfect, just wanted somewhere to post it and get some constructive critisism.
    =) Thanks.

     
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  2. Ember* Advent One

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    Its okay, but the body is out of proportion, the head seems bigger than the rest of the body, is It a chibi?, If not you have to work on your characters body's in the future, apart from that little bit of lecturing, I think you did an okay job ^^
     
  3. x-airashii-x *Gives you a glacical stare*

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    Thankyou! Nah, it wasn't meant to be a chibi. Perhaps i should draw chibis instead XD
    Thanks much aprpeciated!
     
  4. zamiel art slave

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    you need to work on human antomy in general, bigeest problems i can spot ...eyes way too apart, ears are not alighed ,arms too thin and weird hands.
    just keep at it.

    also, there is a Naruto fanart board, where this should go into...just wait or ask a mod to move it :].
     
  5. vervex Art prevails!

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    Wrong section... *sighs*
     
  6. Sai Die you ass-kisser!

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    Just need to fix right arm, it looks too small compare to the right one and her eyes are too far away from each other, I hope my constructive comment will help ya ^^
     
  7. Yakushi Kabuto Socks Activate! Shape of a

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    Agreed that her body looks a bit too small, I like how you colored her and the flow of the scarf is pleasent. Her eyes are just too far appear and something about the shape of her jaw throws me off a little. But that aside, I do like her expression, quite a sweet look.
     
  8. Kakuzu GB Imperator

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    You should try to even out her ears and fix up her fingers. I know those are hard to do.

    Other than that, I think its very cute, and I like the way you colored it.
     
  9. Shirozaki d a r k a b y s s

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    For your first try, it's pretty good.

    Take up some tutorials @ about coloring (with Photoshop) and you'll surely get bettar. ;3
     
  10. x-airashii-x *Gives you a glacical stare*

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    Thanks for everyone's replies, i'll take everyone's constructive critisism into account. And i'm sorry for posting in the wrong section, i'm kinda new here.
     
  11. Creator ♥Tsunade's Husband♥

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    Its good. Just need to get the body proportion right and your set.
     
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    Pretty good, keep up the work :kthumb
     
  13. effloresce dont @ me

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    airashii-chan :glomp
    your tenten pic looks nice imo
     
  14. x-airashii-x *Gives you a glacical stare*

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    Thanks again guys ^^

    edit: ravskeeeee-chan! fankooo ^^
     
  15. Hitomi =^● ⋏ ●^=

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    I like how you colored her eyes they look very lively and the the scarf is a nice touch too.
     
  16. ♥Body Buddy♥ DEIDARA FTW!

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    good for a first. It's good.
     
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