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Yondaime's Last Moments

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by nimbus16, Oct 14, 2006.

  1. nimbus16 Member

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    I always wondered what Yondies final moments were like, and this is what I percieve (sp?) it as. I was tempted to put in a shadowy figure of Kyuubi in the background but I got lazy :\ As usual, all of your comments are greatly appericated it and I even love crtique more. =)

    THANKS!
    nimbus
     
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  2. The Pink Ninja Infamous Cocksucker

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    That's pretty nice. Next time you might wnat to get Yondaime lying on his front a bit more. He needs a more natural interaction with the ground.
     
  3. ViolentlyHappy is limited edition only

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  4. az0r Active Member

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    thats so awesome and sad i love the coloring
     
  5. Mojim Gin-ism

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    Woah,that's very touching :(
    Awesome work :thumbs
     
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    I love it and its awesome!!!

    Great work.
     
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    aww..such a sad scene
     
  9. kire BaTShIT CrAzY

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    yeah it must have been a great scene..
    You did a good job on it..
    one thing I saw was I think the baby Naruto should have less hair, and look a bit more baby like.
     
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    Wowza at the love here! :p
    Thanks guys, I appericate all the comments!

    Kire: Yeah, I always draw baby naru like hes around 1 year for an odd reason, thats how I always saw it as his age. (apparently he was a newborn -_-) I'll keep that in mind, though! =D
     
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  12. ramseyT Crazy is better

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    wow, uuhhh this one was kinda weird, like yoidames arm(the one coming out of the right side of the page) looks a bit off somehow
     
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    That is so touching. Very sweet.

    Good job :)
     
  14. Shadow Slayer Poof no Jutsu

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    Very nice drawing. Keep up the amazing work.
     
  15. SunnyxShine Queen Seon Deok ♥

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    OMG~!!! :wtf THATS SO SAD~!!!


    waaaa~!!!

    :thumbs its really good too....

    Dx awww~
     
  16. yummysasuke Kim Jaejoong

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    I really like your idea. I reckon it's really nice. :) But Naruto's hand/arm is a little big compared to the rest of him.
     
  17. TheStoryMaster Member

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    Nine tail fox made naruto an old baby :p
     
  18. nimbus16 Member

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    Haha, yeah he is kinda old looking eh? :p

    Thanks for all the wonderful comments =D
     
  19. Kurosaki Eyeshield 21 Ya-Ha!

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    It's a really nice picture and it looks good too.
     
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    I really like it, taking some creative license by making him naruto's dad, but thats a popular theory. Had you put a shadowing kyubi (in all its evil glory) in the backround this would have be amazing, as it is its still pretty good. Think about adding it later
     
  21. Superb Herb Follower Of Jesus Christ

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    Very nice job, would look better if you made Yondys face more like it really is, you drew it too skinny. Other than that good job, better than I can do.
     
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    awsome drawing:spaz
     
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