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Zetsu Drawing

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by cloystreng, Jun 2, 2007.

  1. cloystreng

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    Here is one I made of Zetsu. Please tell me what ya think and what i can fix.

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    Not bad, his arms are a bit limp looking and his feet are a bit wierd.
     
  3. cloystreng

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    o the arms are out of the sleeves like itachi holds his arms. Thats how ive seen zetsu drawn.
     
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    Ah, so it is just the wind blowing his sleeves? I thought his arms were in them as well, perhaps some sort of background or movement lines would have helped. Anyway, it looks quite good otherwise.
     
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    it looks really good. are his arms in his sleeves? because it doesnt look like it. anyways good job!
     
  6. cloystreng

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    Oh yeah I guess a leaf or something blowing in the wind would have made that clear about the wind.
     
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    it's funny!! try to make the feet a little differently and it's good!!
     
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    mingunner strikes again,please GTFO you lil tarp.
     
  11. Shirozaki

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    I think it's perfect. :kthumb
     
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    ^
    I agree :amuse keep up the good work.
     
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    not bad wish i could draw
     
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    Ohhh, well in that case it's a lot better, just maybe you should make it look like he's got his arms in the robe, like a bulge in the sides.

    But that's not that bad, the only thing I think needs fixing is his feet.
     
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    Haha cool , I like it:)
     
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    Better than I could do ^_^

    Keep it up!
     
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    i like it alot...Good Work
     
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    I like it good job!
     
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    I love the clouds, and i like the green leaf thingy alot.
     
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